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Comment from
onebrit
When I was a kid running away to join the French Foreign Legion was considered a very romantic thing to do as they went to places that were thought of as very exotic. Are you planning on turning this piece into something longer. One thing, you have written there twice when it should be their.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
I am going to try to make it longer. Thank you your feedback is greatly appreciated.
Comment from
kiwijenny
To get there drugs.....their drugs....
Yikes ...I have heard of the Foreign Legion ...but i didn't know people still ran away to join it...
Vary soon...very soon
Vary few....very few.....intriguing read
God bless..
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
Thank you your feedback is greatly appreciated.
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