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My Father was a Gardener

rhyming quatrains

145 total reviews 
Comment from rhymelord
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My Dear Brooke,
I have long felt some affinity with your father. Don't ask me why. Anyway, this little gem confirms that we could be equal spirits. I particularly like your tribute in the last two lines.
Best regards
Reg

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
    Reg, thank you so very much for your generous rating and thoughtful comments, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
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How very fortunate you are to have such beautiful memories.
A father's love, understanding and gift of undivided attention sounds like pure bliss.
A garden can be a sanctuary of beauty and precious memories or a lifeless, overgrown reminder of a sad past.
This lovely series of rhyming quatrains shines with the positivity and beauty of life depicted through the eyes of that special relationship between father and child.
A virtual six.
Shirley

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
    Seken, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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A beautiful story about your father. Everyone who woks long and hard deseves to gaden fon their hammock. I love this,
glorious wildflowers that some would call weeds. He and I knew they were just thousands of splendid free flowers. Have a geat day, my fiend~Debbie

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
    Debbie, thank you so much :_) Brooke
Comment from Delahay
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This sounds like a very relaxing way to tend a garden. It would seem your father worked long, hard hours to provide for his family, he deserved the time to sit back and just enjoy looking out over the "garden" growing around the house.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
    WardHays, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
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Oh Brooke what a truly lovely rhyme which shows what sort of man your Father was. The rhyming quatrains are perfect and also a perfect picture choice. Cheers Gaye

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much, Gaye :-) Brooke
Comment from Spitfire
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I do really like this tribute to wild flowers. Imaginative comparison with the robin. Your father had his priorities right. Set time aside to just enjoy the natural beauty around this. And there's also a great pleasure in the colors of a sunset.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thanks so much, Spitfire :-) Brooke
Comment from Bina1
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So he is who gave you your love of the lowly dandelions! A fine family tradition to cherish, thank you for sharing your fine poem.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Bina, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Linda England Bonam
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Such a cute story in a poem. I admired your rhyming quatrains. After a long day at work, the last thing on your mind should be working in the garden! However, sometimes you have to. I liked that he tended to it from the comfort of his hammock.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thanks so much, Linda :-) Brooke
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Gorgeous artwork with a beautiful spring feel and I love these rhyming quatrains about your father's free seeded wild flower garden.A delightful read,

valda

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    valda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a beautiful poem that the author has created with this piece of work. I have fond memories of my father too. He worked long hours too to provide for his family. He also did housework, cooked and worked on the farm I his hours off work. He never stopped or complained and he had a great sense of humour.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Tomes, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
reply by Tomes Johnston on 23-Sep-2014
    My pleasure