My soul
tells a story of how someone feels depressed2 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Midnight. I see you are new to the site. You have posted this in the 5-7-5 contest which is the syllable count of each line and your posting is certainly not in 5-7-5 style.
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Hi Midnight. I see you are new to the site. You have posted this in the 5-7-5 contest which is the syllable count of each line and your posting is certainly not in 5-7-5 style.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
Comment from Glasstruth
Mysterious and full of Halloween magic. This though, could use a little more description, and the word 'lost' is used one too many times. Don't get me wrong. It's still a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Les
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Mysterious and full of Halloween magic. This though, could use a little more description, and the word 'lost' is used one too many times. Don't get me wrong. It's still a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
