Internal Change True Change
The only true lasting change is internally11 total reviews
Comment from TAB_that's me
It is a great poem of wisdom and well done. The first line though throws me off a bit: Seek you a change - take out 'you' - seek a change - sounds better to me - just a suggestion:)
Teresa
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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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It is a great poem of wisdom and well done. The first line though throws me off a bit: Seek you a change - take out 'you' - seek a change - sounds better to me - just a suggestion:)
Teresa
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Tab thank you for your review. Yes I struggled with that also, but it is myself talking to self. Giovanni
