Comment from JM

Excellent

Not to mention the husbsnd, the dog, and the cat. I hear you loud and clear. Loved ones sure do know how to burst one's bubble. :)

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014

Thank you for your great feedback JM :) all my bubbles have been popped this weekend! Bloomin' family!! Kindest regards, Debra :)

Comment from Saucey

Excellent

Visual aid assisted this well written piece, distractions can rob inspiration, pop, pop, pop, thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

Thank you so much Saucey for your great feedback. I appreciate it! Kindest regards....:)

reply by Saucey on 20-Sep-2014

You're welcome.

Comment from Matoshka

Excellent

Loved your picture and your thoughts, it is so true. I really enjoyed it and it brought a smile to my face. Blessings and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

Thank you so much Matoshka for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards....:)

reply by Matoshka on 20-Sep-2014

So very welcome, and I'm still smiling. Blessings

Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

I very much like your gogyoshi poem. It rings so true to life. Just when the inspiration appears . . .

I like your use of "pop." It adds a fun impact to your words. Your last word - "sign" speaks a thousand words. You've made good use of alliteration to create a nice flow.

Good luck in the contest, mystery writer! Alana

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

Thank you so much Alana for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards....:)

reply by acerisestory on 20-Sep-2014

You are welcome! Alana

Comment from mauial

Excellent

Inspiration bubbles get popped by interruption from children. It must happen a lot if you have young ones. Good job with the form.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

Thank you, for your positive feedback and for sponsoring such a fun prompt. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your poem is so true. The picture is fitting. I would change nothing. I expected something else based on the title, but you surprised me. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

Thank you, jannypan for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

good economy of words that follows contest guidelines for being concise
excellent use of alliteration
with strong sensory appeal
good use of onomatopoeia
this is vividly described and creates a smile :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

Thank you, Brooke for your lovely feedback. Kindest regards...:)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is a cute gogyoshi write about the bubbles of inspiration that burst when children enter the room and attention is taken away from the present write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

Thank you sweetwoodjax for your lovely feedback and good luck wishes. I appreciate both! Kindest regards...:)