He Held My Hand
Minute poem52 total reviews
Comment from DSMalott
Nicely done.
This is my first exposure to reviewing 'minute'. It appears to me that your did a good job. The constrictions of the contest did not prevent you from conveying your theme very well. Rhyme scheme was good and your word choices produced good visuals.
Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Nicely done.
This is my first exposure to reviewing 'minute'. It appears to me that your did a good job. The constrictions of the contest did not prevent you from conveying your theme very well. Rhyme scheme was good and your word choices produced good visuals.
Well done.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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It's my first time too! I just had to give it a go. Thank you so much for your lovely review! :) sandra
Comment from James Dooney
I do quite like this little work you have given to us here. I am sure the good lord would love to hold your hand ! Keep it up !
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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I do quite like this little work you have given to us here. I am sure the good lord would love to hold your hand ! Keep it up !
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Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Thank you, James, so much for your lovely words! :) Sandra
