He Held My Hand
Minute poem52 total reviews
Comment from Trybuck
I can't tell you if the meter is right but you've got the syllable count correct. If the meter is right, then you've got an excellent entry in the contest, Buck
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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I can't tell you if the meter is right but you've got the syllable count correct. If the meter is right, then you've got an excellent entry in the contest, Buck
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Buck. The rules for this contest have said that the iambic meter is not necessary this time, which was really good news for me, because I have no idea what 'Iambic meter' is! I really must find out what it is. LOL. Thank you for your lovely review! Sandra :)
Comment from jmdg1954
You, my dear are a masterful writer. I don't believe I've read anything of yours I have not liked. My favorite by far still of the Chimney Sweep and this one now is close up there.
For your first time writing this poem you've just hit a home run, a grand salami! Superb.
So nicely done. John
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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You, my dear are a masterful writer. I don't believe I've read anything of yours I have not liked. My favorite by far still of the Chimney Sweep and this one now is close up there.
For your first time writing this poem you've just hit a home run, a grand salami! Superb.
So nicely done. John
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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You are so kind, John, thank you so much for your wonderful compliment. The Chimney Sweep Boy, was hard to write, thinking of those poor children who had to do that everyday of their short lives. I'm really pleased you enjoyed this one too. Thank you and a big hug for the shiny 6 stars! :) Sandra
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh Sandra, I hope you 'got it right' too because I LOVED it! This is beautiful, and I don't think there could be a more perfect topic. Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Oh Sandra, I hope you 'got it right' too because I LOVED it! This is beautiful, and I don't think there could be a more perfect topic. Best of luck in the contest, my friend.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Aww, thank you, Dawn. It was a bit of a challenge, but the words seemed to slip in just nicely. I'm really glad you liked it, thanks millions for the best of luck wishes. :) xsx Sandra
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Entirely my pleasure, Sandra.
Comment from amahra
Minute poem. Don't think I ever read one. But if this is an example of one, then I think I'm going to like them. Beautiful art work you've chosen for this.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Minute poem. Don't think I ever read one. But if this is an example of one, then I think I'm going to like them. Beautiful art work you've chosen for this.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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I'm so pleased you like this one, it's my first in this style, and was lovely learning to write it. Thank you so much for your lovely comments, Amahra. xsx Sandra
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are clear, strong and creative. The artwork is perfect and enhances the reading of this poem.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words are clear, strong and creative. The artwork is perfect and enhances the reading of this poem.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Thank you for your lovely review, Harmony13! :) Sandra
Comment from reconciled
How....? Hi Sandy....-smile-...I watched...CNN...do something....good. They started airing ...ahh honoring....people who...went about doing good. I remember the first time I seen it.....it broke my heart in gratitude....and confirmed God's existence...usually that hand you speak of is human Spirit filling the cup of another...with proof. whenever good...stands against evil we are the frame of Jesus pictured in someone's eyes....breathing a living faith real enough to believe in. Its a most beautiful write....love you Michael
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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How....? Hi Sandy....-smile-...I watched...CNN...do something....good. They started airing ...ahh honoring....people who...went about doing good. I remember the first time I seen it.....it broke my heart in gratitude....and confirmed God's existence...usually that hand you speak of is human Spirit filling the cup of another...with proof. whenever good...stands against evil we are the frame of Jesus pictured in someone's eyes....breathing a living faith real enough to believe in. Its a most beautiful write....love you Michael
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Oh, thank you! You always say such lovely things, I'm really glad you liked my poem, Michael, Love you too, my dear friend. xsx Sandra
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, Sandra, you did an excellent job wirting this minute poem, every time I write one I'm disqualified for non iambic meter, lol. I loved this one. good luck in the contest. pyrrho is giving me a hard time about my faith poetry. I just hope I plant a seed.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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this is an excellent write, Sandra, you did an excellent job wirting this minute poem, every time I write one I'm disqualified for non iambic meter, lol. I loved this one. good luck in the contest. pyrrho is giving me a hard time about my faith poetry. I just hope I plant a seed.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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I know what you mean, Pyrro, is an old rascal! He reviewed this one in his sweet way. He is really quite nice when you get to know him. LOL. This site contest has taken out the iambic meter, so try writing another one. There is more freedom this way. I'm glad you enjoyed mine. Thank you so much. :) Sandra
Comment from jaeladarling
I never tire of this subject. :) You've done well, I think, so I'd say you "got it right". ;) An enjoyable read - thanks so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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I never tire of this subject. :) You've done well, I think, so I'd say you "got it right". ;) An enjoyable read - thanks so much for sharing!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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What a lovely review, thank you so very much, Jaeladarling! I'm really pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xsx
Comment from Nosha17
A lovely spiritual poem, Sandra, with a powerful message. With Him by our side, we will feel secure and safe. Excellent rhyming and super picture. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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A lovely spiritual poem, Sandra, with a powerful message. With Him by our side, we will feel secure and safe. Excellent rhyming and super picture. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Faye, so much for your lovely review and good luck wishes! :) Sandra.
Comment from SteveY
I don't know the rules for this style of poetry, but who cares? The message of hope and caring are profound. Way to go with this one.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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I don't know the rules for this style of poetry, but who cares? The message of hope and caring are profound. Way to go with this one.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much, Steve, for this wonderful review! Sandra :)
