He Held My Hand
Minute poem52 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
It sounds beautiful to me, Sandra. I think it's 8/4/4/4 if I read that right. I love the artwork you used. It works so well with your Minute entry. Best wishes in the contest, sandra. Hugs, Drew
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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It sounds beautiful to me, Sandra. I think it's 8/4/4/4 if I read that right. I love the artwork you used. It works so well with your Minute entry. Best wishes in the contest, sandra. Hugs, Drew
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem, Drew, thank you so much for your lovely review! :) Sandra xsx
Comment from Aussie
Sure must have written something right - congratulations on All Time Best status! There is a poem about a man who questioned god about not being there because there were no footprints in the sand - "My son, that is when I carried you." We all need to look up and live. Well done friend.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Sure must have written something right - congratulations on All Time Best status! There is a poem about a man who questioned god about not being there because there were no footprints in the sand - "My son, that is when I carried you." We all need to look up and live. Well done friend.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Hi Kay, thank you so much for you lovely words. I was given that poem, 'Footsteps in the Sand,' after my first husband died. it was such a comfort. That was nearly 30 years ago. I can't believe how quickly time has passed. Thank you again, my lovely friend. xsx Sandra
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No blue doors at present!! You are the one that must open new doors to the future. Love, Kay.
Comment from sunnilicious
Minute Poems can be difficult. You have a good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good spiritual visual imagery. Nice message. Good work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Minute Poems can be difficult. You have a good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Good spiritual visual imagery. Nice message. Good work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Sunnilicious, for your lovely review! I am so pleased you enjoyed mine, and thank you for the good luck wishes! xsx Sandra.
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, this is a truly magnificent piece of minute poetry. Your message of how He took you by the hand and walked you into the light of His love and saving grace. A very exceptional message that people whose souls may be lost should read. I wish you much luck in this contest. My very best and love to you,,,,,,,,Jim xxxx
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Sandra, this is a truly magnificent piece of minute poetry. Your message of how He took you by the hand and walked you into the light of His love and saving grace. A very exceptional message that people whose souls may be lost should read. I wish you much luck in this contest. My very best and love to you,,,,,,,,Jim xxxx
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Oh Jim, thank you so very much, my dearest friend! You are always so kind to me, you have no idea how much I appreciate you. I am sending you a big hug for the 6 stars, thank you so very much for it all and the good luck wishes!! Love you loads, Jim. Sandra xxxx
Comment from IndianaIrish
Lovely presentation of your Minute poem,,Sandra, and I think your poem is wonderful. I like how each stanza stands alone, but together, they make a fantastic read. Best wishes.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Lovely presentation of your Minute poem,,Sandra, and I think your poem is wonderful. I like how each stanza stands alone, but together, they make a fantastic read. Best wishes.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Aw, thank you, Karyn. I am really made up that you liked this one. A big hug for the 6 stars!! :) Sandra
Comment from tfawcus
I don't know much about minute poetry but I have read quite a bit of it recently. It is an interesting form and I think you have handled it expertly, especially considering this is your first attempt. I like your phrase 'the dunes of happiness'. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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I don't know much about minute poetry but I have read quite a bit of it recently. It is an interesting form and I think you have handled it expertly, especially considering this is your first attempt. I like your phrase 'the dunes of happiness'. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Tony, that is such a lovely review, thank you so very much! And thank you also for the good luck wishes, you are so kind! :) Sandra.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
your chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the Lord as he takes you by the hand to renew your strength to make you whole once more
good visual
good rhyme through out
cheers Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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good luck in the contest
your chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the Lord as he takes you by the hand to renew your strength to make you whole once more
good visual
good rhyme through out
cheers Smoothiecool
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Faye. You always give me lovely reviews. Then I started thinking, I don't see much of your writing, and realised I am not on your fan list! Just rectified that! Sorry it took me so long, thank you again, Faye, you have been a great friend, and I hope you will find I am a good friend of yours too. :) Sandra
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thanks for the kind words
yes great to be able to stay friends
always welcome to reviews
have a blessed day
cheers..SC >>Faye
Comment from Eric1
Hi Sandra, what a wonderfully constructed poem for this minute competition my friend, beautifully presented written and conveyed, It flows like a dream with good rhyming and a lovely rhythm, Superb!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Hi Sandra, what a wonderfully constructed poem for this minute competition my friend, beautifully presented written and conveyed, It flows like a dream with good rhyming and a lovely rhythm, Superb!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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What a wonderful review, Eric, thank you so very much! A big thank you for the 6 stars, too! I'm just so pleased you enjoyed my poem. :) Sandra xsx
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It was brilliant Sandra, a pleasure to review.
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Sandra,
Right or not, and I think it's OK, this is a beautifully balanced piece of writing with excellent driving metre and strong rhymes. Good luck in the comp..
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Dear Sandra,
Right or not, and I think it's OK, this is a beautifully balanced piece of writing with excellent driving metre and strong rhymes. Good luck in the comp..
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much, Reg, for your wonderful review of my poem. And thank you for the good luck wishes! :) Sandra
Comment from Dean Kuch
A beautifully written Minute poem, Sandra. Geesh, this is your first one? I would have never known had I not read your author's notes. The rhyming seemed perfect, and you chose an uplifting topic with a very positive message.
I should think you'll do very well in the contest.
Your presentation was stunning as well.
Great work, and best of luck!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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A beautifully written Minute poem, Sandra. Geesh, this is your first one? I would have never known had I not read your author's notes. The rhyming seemed perfect, and you chose an uplifting topic with a very positive message.
I should think you'll do very well in the contest.
Your presentation was stunning as well.
Great work, and best of luck!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Dean, your review is lovely. Thank you for your best of luck wishes as well. :) Sandra xsx
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My pleasure as always, Sandra. :}
