He Held My Hand
Minute poem52 total reviews
Comment from MAB
Nice poem. Its neat to write quick in a quick thinking type of mode. I think you may have been inspired by the lord in the last few seconds to do this and he just took your hand
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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Nice poem. Its neat to write quick in a quick thinking type of mode. I think you may have been inspired by the lord in the last few seconds to do this and he just took your hand
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Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you. Sandra.
Comment from Selina Stambi
I'd walked alone in life before
Sad and unsure
He saw my soul...
He made me whole .. Oh, I know just what you mean!
Beautifully crafted, Sandra. Not sure of the rules of the minute poem, but this one shines bright in my eyes.
Hugs and kisses,
xxx
Sonali :)
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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I'd walked alone in life before
Sad and unsure
He saw my soul...
He made me whole .. Oh, I know just what you mean!
Beautifully crafted, Sandra. Not sure of the rules of the minute poem, but this one shines bright in my eyes.
Hugs and kisses,
xxx
Sonali :)
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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You are always lovely to me, Sonali! Thank you so much for your lovely review. xsx Sandra
Comment from l.raven
HI Sandra, this is so beautiful...I love the last four lines...I love the whole poem...just knowing He is walking with us...knowing He is really there...I love your poem...and your picture and colors are stunning...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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HI Sandra, this is so beautiful...I love the last four lines...I love the whole poem...just knowing He is walking with us...knowing He is really there...I love your poem...and your picture and colors are stunning...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you my dear friend. I am really pleased you liked my little poem! :) Sandra xsx
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you are always so welcome Sandra...have a great day...or night...Luff xxoo
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine minute poem! i love the topic and the execution! from alone and sad to comfort by faith and god.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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this is a fine minute poem! i love the topic and the execution! from alone and sad to comfort by faith and god.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Rebekka, for this lovely review! I am so glad you enjoyed it! :) xsx Sandra
Comment from heyjude
Sandra, what a lovely declaration of faith in God.
I like the picture you found to go with your poem.
Great job on this minute poem. God does indeed
walk with us during our trials.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Sandra, what a lovely declaration of faith in God.
I like the picture you found to go with your poem.
Great job on this minute poem. God does indeed
walk with us during our trials.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Judy! The picture is wonderful, isn't it. I am pleased you liked my poem! :) Sandra
Comment from flamingstar
Simple and beautiful. I've no idea if you've got it right but I love the way it sounds! Especially the last two lines. I think this describes Saeed's encounter with Jesus when He asked him to turn away from Islam and follow Him.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Simple and beautiful. I've no idea if you've got it right but I love the way it sounds! Especially the last two lines. I think this describes Saeed's encounter with Jesus when He asked him to turn away from Islam and follow Him.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, flamingstar, for your lovely review! :) Sandra
Comment from kiwisteveh
Yes, the Minute form is fine, with perhaps the tiniest glitch in the meter in line 10.
The poem is a gentle and reassuring one of Christian faith with each short stanza echoing the presence of God in our lives.
Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Yes, the Minute form is fine, with perhaps the tiniest glitch in the meter in line 10.
The poem is a gentle and reassuring one of Christian faith with each short stanza echoing the presence of God in our lives.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Steve, for your lovely review. I am going to learn more about this style, and hope one day to get it spot on. I am really pleased you enjoyed the poem as it stands, so many, many thanks for that, and for the good luck wishes! :) Sandra xsx
Comment from mfowler
This is a lovely faith filled message couched in a succinct and effective format. It reminds me of that Christian poem/poster that's been around for decades. It shows Jesus walking in the sand alongside a person who is clearly seeking. Her it's teh dunes of happiness, but i is still that idea of a friend leading and consoling. Your final verse is stunning. It says it all about faith, redemption and the power of Christ's love.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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This is a lovely faith filled message couched in a succinct and effective format. It reminds me of that Christian poem/poster that's been around for decades. It shows Jesus walking in the sand alongside a person who is clearly seeking. Her it's teh dunes of happiness, but i is still that idea of a friend leading and consoling. Your final verse is stunning. It says it all about faith, redemption and the power of Christ's love.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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I loved that poem. The first time I read that poem, 'Footsteps in the Sand,' was when a good friend put it into a card she sent me after my first husband died nearly 30 years ago. The comfort that brought me was immense. To put my poem in the same sentence is such a compliment, thank you so very much! :) Sandra
Comment from Neonewman
Absolutely loved this Minute, I will root for your win in this contest. Five stars from me for sure. Thank you for posting and God Bless.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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Absolutely loved this Minute, I will root for your win in this contest. Five stars from me for sure. Thank you for posting and God Bless.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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What a lovely thing to say! Thank you so very much for this lovely review, Neonewman, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. :) Sandra xsx
Comment from L.M.Mullins
I am not a very spiritual person so the stars are for the exceptional crafting of your work. I see nothing that varies from the contest rules. Your message flow easily from the page. Good luck.
LM
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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I am not a very spiritual person so the stars are for the exceptional crafting of your work. I see nothing that varies from the contest rules. Your message flow easily from the page. Good luck.
LM
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014
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That is such a lovely compliment, thank you so much, L.M. I really appreciate that. Thank you also for the good luck wishes, you might not be very 'spiritual' but you have the kindness that spirituality is all about. :) Sandra. xsx
