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My Ba Ba Ba, Bounce About Girl

uh huh, da's her

72 total reviews 
Comment from Christine B.
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Well, I feel as if I've suddenly wandered into a man's mind. This makes for quite the trippy experience. I like it! Plenty comes to mind throughout the dance.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
    Thank you, Christine.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Exceptional
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Tip, tip, tip
toes her slippers
a craw, craw, 'cross
'dem timbres.

Tip, tip, tip,
rock, rock, rock
's...the ship.

My ba, ba, ba,
bounce about girl.

This bigger 'an your door,
Satch.

This is such a easy read to understand. I love the feel and craftsmanship you poured into it
Bear

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
    Hey Big Guy. :)
Comment from c_lucas
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Everyone needs a jubilant energy around them as they aged.This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
    Ha, Charlie. You're the best.
reply by c_lucas on 12-Oct-2014
    You're welcome, Victor. Charlie
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi Victor,

The jazz beat indeed. This is good. Great artwork as well.

I have a CD I love! It's Curtis Stigers. Have you listened to his music? Good jazz.

Fun read.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
    Thanks.
Comment from mikemagine
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Cool stuff! I'm not very familiar with jazz tunes or artists, but I like this. You painted me a nice picture. I see no weaknesses.

Thanks for sharing!

Mike

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
    Thanks, Mike.
reply by mikemagine on 12-Oct-2014
    Glad to, my friend!
Comment from Jay Squires
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Wow! I can feel the intensity and the electric moment in your poetry, Victor. The Jazz vernacular is da bomb!

Dang! Wish I knew the tune to "Moanin", but you do it up good!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
    Ha, Jay. u da bomb!
Comment from Eigle Rull
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Very cute lyrics, my friend. It has a real flow to it too. It's smooth and graceful. It is interesting and held my attention as I read through it twice. Not bad at all, my friend.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
    Thank you, you old fart!
Comment from Ebear
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I have to say when i read it at first I wasn't quite understanding it but then I saw your Author notes and it made more sense. Good job.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
    Thank you.
Comment from jaeladarling
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I like this a lot! Nice rhythm going, and a pleasant read. I can almost hear music behind it. :) Wonderful work - thanks so much for sharing with us!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
    Thank you.
Comment from brentman99
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I don't think I've ever seen a poem quite like this. I was trying to figure out the rhythm, then it turned out I should have been looking for the best. An interesting concept. Thanks for sharing, Brent.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
    Thank you.