My Ba Ba Ba, Bounce About Girl
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
It certainly worked for me - this jazzy poem. Thought that was what it sounded like even before I read your author notes so it must be good. You got it across fine. I think though, you are being a bit ambitious regarding Louis Armstrong, but maybe he would have made a great job singing it as he did with everything else. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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It certainly worked for me - this jazzy poem. Thought that was what it sounded like even before I read your author notes so it must be good. You got it across fine. I think though, you are being a bit ambitious regarding Louis Armstrong, but maybe he would have made a great job singing it as he did with everything else. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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I ain't even in the same building with Satchmo, let alone on the same flo.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
First, I had to look up the tune so I cold embrace the rhythm. Once that was done this was a really fun read which I enjoyed immensely. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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First, I had to look up the tune so I cold embrace the rhythm. Once that was done this was a really fun read which I enjoyed immensely. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you, too.
Comment from Wendyanne
This is lovely lively bouncy piece of poetry/lyrics. It certainly has a lot of rhythm in it. great imagery throughout as well victor
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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This is lovely lively bouncy piece of poetry/lyrics. It certainly has a lot of rhythm in it. great imagery throughout as well victor
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
No one can deny your creativity, Vic. You are certainly one creative son-of-a-gun (What...? What did you think I was going to say?)
Please forgive me, but Ba-ba-balck sheep kept popping into me head as I read this. I did look up the tune on YouTube to help me out with the rhythm, as I wasn't familiar with the tune. It helped me out a lot. Perhaps you could include the video at the bottom of your post for others who don't know the tune. it might help them out as well.
Good stuff!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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No one can deny your creativity, Vic. You are certainly one creative son-of-a-gun (What...? What did you think I was going to say?)
Please forgive me, but Ba-ba-balck sheep kept popping into me head as I read this. I did look up the tune on YouTube to help me out with the rhythm, as I wasn't familiar with the tune. It helped me out a lot. Perhaps you could include the video at the bottom of your post for others who don't know the tune. it might help them out as well.
Good stuff!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Whooo ha!
Comment from ravenblack
This poem demands to be read aloud and I am looking forward to hearing it. Bouncing baby becomes a bouncing babe lulled by wolf whistles. Piano me down- you tickle those keys well, Satchmo.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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This poem demands to be read aloud and I am looking forward to hearing it. Bouncing baby becomes a bouncing babe lulled by wolf whistles. Piano me down- you tickle those keys well, Satchmo.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Ha ha, U did hear it. Any good?
Comment from Acquired Taste
Liked this a lot - I must admit with the Ba, ba, ba at the beginning all I could think of was that oldie - Ba, Ba, Ba, Ba, Barbara Ann and I could not get the tune out of my head. So, if it ever happens that I get amnesia and the tune leaves - am sure I will be able to enjoy this a bit more! Nicely done. AT=/
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Liked this a lot - I must admit with the Ba, ba, ba at the beginning all I could think of was that oldie - Ba, Ba, Ba, Ba, Barbara Ann and I could not get the tune out of my head. So, if it ever happens that I get amnesia and the tune leaves - am sure I will be able to enjoy this a bit more! Nicely done. AT=/
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from acerisestory
You had me dancin' and singin' with this one, Victor! I love the repetition of words (sounds) to add a fun impact.
Your use of alliteration, rhyme and enjambment add a great flow and rhythm. I particularly like:
Little tip-toe
a shoulder toss so
eyes beneath
are rollin' to an' fro
Great! Thank for sharing. Alana
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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You had me dancin' and singin' with this one, Victor! I love the repetition of words (sounds) to add a fun impact.
Your use of alliteration, rhyme and enjambment add a great flow and rhythm. I particularly like:
Little tip-toe
a shoulder toss so
eyes beneath
are rollin' to an' fro
Great! Thank for sharing. Alana
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
I must admit I don't know the melody or the rhythm, but the wording wold have to be jazz, almost colloquial in language, but exactly what it's saying I'm not sure, well done, I think, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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I must admit I don't know the melody or the rhythm, but the wording wold have to be jazz, almost colloquial in language, but exactly what it's saying I'm not sure, well done, I think, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from James Dooney
Oh gosh I thought this was a Kpop influenced poem ! seriously there is a Kpop song that has the title ba ba ba bounce in it ! good work here by the way !
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Oh gosh I thought this was a Kpop influenced poem ! seriously there is a Kpop song that has the title ba ba ba bounce in it ! good work here by the way !
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from livelylinda
victortouche: I don't know the tune but as I read the piece, it created its own bouncy tune which worked just fine. This is original, creative, fresh, an eye opener this morning. Great work! Virtual six for this one; I'm out of the real thing. livelylinda
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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victortouche: I don't know the tune but as I read the piece, it created its own bouncy tune which worked just fine. This is original, creative, fresh, an eye opener this morning. Great work! Virtual six for this one; I'm out of the real thing. livelylinda
Comment Written 19-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Linda.
