Contagious Human Suffering
Suffering usually includes an avalanch of people.145 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
In a world of darkness there is only one light to show the way. It beams brightly for you and others through the door of Jesus Christ. Love finds away. Blessings to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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In a world of darkness there is only one light to show the way. It beams brightly for you and others through the door of Jesus Christ. Love finds away. Blessings to you in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Nosha17
I think that it starts with hatred and evil, an underlying current to all suffering. So sad that the world is so full of it. Like you said, believe in God and things will be resolved. Good choice of imagery and words to convey your message. Scary picture. Faye
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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I think that it starts with hatred and evil, an underlying current to all suffering. So sad that the world is so full of it. Like you said, believe in God and things will be resolved. Good choice of imagery and words to convey your message. Scary picture. Faye
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Charlieboy123
I pray for peace and joy in the Family
A little love and understanding from one
Understanding from one to overflow to all
God bless you all one and all
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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I pray for peace and joy in the Family
A little love and understanding from one
Understanding from one to overflow to all
God bless you all one and all
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Eigle Rull
I just read a suffering poem a minute ago and gave it my last six star rating. I regret doing it, because your poem is far better than it was. It lists many different areas of suffering. The picture is perfect. It is interesting and held my attention to the point that I could not stop reading. It made my emotions come to life. It was perfect, in my mind. My friend, I'm sorry that I don't have a six star left to give you, even though you definitely deserve one for this beautiful piece of work. Well done, my friend.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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I just read a suffering poem a minute ago and gave it my last six star rating. I regret doing it, because your poem is far better than it was. It lists many different areas of suffering. The picture is perfect. It is interesting and held my attention to the point that I could not stop reading. It made my emotions come to life. It was perfect, in my mind. My friend, I'm sorry that I don't have a six star left to give you, even though you definitely deserve one for this beautiful piece of work. Well done, my friend.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Eigle Rull: thanks for reading and for the thinking this poem six star worthy.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, the way so much suffering is felt by people everywhere. one person doesn't hold the cards on suffering. good luck in the contest
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reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, the way so much suffering is felt by people everywhere. one person doesn't hold the cards on suffering. good luck in the contest
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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sweetwoodjax: thanks for reading.
