Creepy Carnieval
What we all do as a family for fun...48 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Well it looks like you got the whole family in on your horror kick. Well done. Was this last year, or did you start Halloween early this year?
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Well it looks like you got the whole family in on your horror kick. Well done. Was this last year, or did you start Halloween early this year?
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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We did it for my wife's niece for her twelfth birthday this year, just last weekend, Lance. She requested that we come up with something spooky for her party, so...we did!
The kids had a great time, and we did too.
Thanks so much for the review, my friend. :}
Comment from Michaelk
if this is what you do for a birthday party, I can't imagine what you do for Halloween. It seems from your story that the Kuch's are a bit of a surly bunch when they get all dressed to kill. And it sounds as though you are just as warped and evil in real life as you write in your stories. :) Cool!
I laughed when Chelsea called you an old perv. And I think your wife should've clubbed you over the head for causing her stress level to skyrocket.
Awesome story about an awesome party.
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if this is what you do for a birthday party, I can't imagine what you do for Halloween. It seems from your story that the Kuch's are a bit of a surly bunch when they get all dressed to kill. And it sounds as though you are just as warped and evil in real life as you write in your stories. :) Cool!
I laughed when Chelsea called you an old perv. And I think your wife should've clubbed you over the head for causing her stress level to skyrocket.
Awesome story about an awesome party.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sounds like you creatures had a blast. I don't know what it is that makes us get so excited about making someone pee on them selves, but I have to admit, it's just plain fun. Great job. :-)
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Sounds like you creatures had a blast. I don't know what it is that makes us get so excited about making someone pee on them selves, but I have to admit, it's just plain fun. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from Acquired Taste
Deano - what sort of theme fun-tivities do you have at Thanksgiving? Is there actually a real-time slaughtering of the turkey - or pig if ham is your usual holiday meal? Or do you celebrate the Winter Solstice? I understand mutton and dog are favorites. Oh, I'd give real money to see your family photo album! Jean
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Deano - what sort of theme fun-tivities do you have at Thanksgiving? Is there actually a real-time slaughtering of the turkey - or pig if ham is your usual holiday meal? Or do you celebrate the Winter Solstice? I understand mutton and dog are favorites. Oh, I'd give real money to see your family photo album! Jean
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from daeneam
Hmmm... I think you're all brave to pull off a party like that. I think kids that age really loves terrifying things.
My only son is fond of using creepy things in his artwork. I told him to put away those things because evil spirit resides in it. I don't know, but that's my belief. I don't want my children playing with such things too because it may possess them or alter one's behavior.
My friend, I'll be away until November. I will take my Ph. D. exam so I need to concentrate. Please pray for me and take care of yourself. c", Mae
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Hmmm... I think you're all brave to pull off a party like that. I think kids that age really loves terrifying things.
My only son is fond of using creepy things in his artwork. I told him to put away those things because evil spirit resides in it. I don't know, but that's my belief. I don't want my children playing with such things too because it may possess them or alter one's behavior.
My friend, I'll be away until November. I will take my Ph. D. exam so I need to concentrate. Please pray for me and take care of yourself. c", Mae
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from royowen
Well written Dean, did your Pastor come? I haven't read a story of yours before so I was particularly pleased with this one! I love the poor girl weeing herself, so it must have happened, were all the costumes worn, as in the photos? It was articulate, well see signed and composed, plot was absorbing and readable, blessings, Roy,
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Well written Dean, did your Pastor come? I haven't read a story of yours before so I was particularly pleased with this one! I love the poor girl weeing herself, so it must have happened, were all the costumes worn, as in the photos? It was articulate, well see signed and composed, plot was absorbing and readable, blessings, Roy,
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from marijmd
I'm looking forward to American Horror stories new season - Freak Show - looks like it might be up your alley too!
Oh peeing the pants - and white shorts too - that cant be a good look
Have you been to Knots Scary farm Halloween haunt?
That seriously gives me nightmares.
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I'm looking forward to American Horror stories new season - Freak Show - looks like it might be up your alley too!
Oh peeing the pants - and white shorts too - that cant be a good look
Have you been to Knots Scary farm Halloween haunt?
That seriously gives me nightmares.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from Loren (7)
Loved your title. Of course, from you how could I expect anything less? This reads like a page from a diary you must gleefully keep. Your love of the carnieval shines through, the way you engage the family, oh, so much fun. Great read - Loren
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Loved your title. Of course, from you how could I expect anything less? This reads like a page from a diary you must gleefully keep. Your love of the carnieval shines through, the way you engage the family, oh, so much fun. Great read - Loren
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from lindalcreel
Well, Halloween is just around the corner and I think this is a perfect story. I remember my husband taking our 12 year old granddaughter and her best friend to a haunted house. They were just inside the door and Alexis turned around and ran outside screaming. Ron still laughs about that. So much for being brave. LOL
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Well, Halloween is just around the corner and I think this is a perfect story. I remember my husband taking our 12 year old granddaughter and her best friend to a haunted house. They were just inside the door and Alexis turned around and ran outside screaming. Ron still laughs about that. So much for being brave. LOL
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
Ohhhhhh, October's coming my friend. No, not Thanksgiving. The walking Dead!
And, on that evening I go to Starbucks to write while my son makes an evening of it.
Your usual tongue through your cheek, licking your lobe good stuff, Dean!
A couple of oooops, I'm sure others have pointed out to you by now.
My had went up... [misspell]
whadda'ya you guys think?" [ya with you sounds weird]
clam demeanor was clearly being compromised. [Clam? misspell]
I know there'll be more toward All Hallow ed's Eve.
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Ohhhhhh, October's coming my friend. No, not Thanksgiving. The walking Dead!
And, on that evening I go to Starbucks to write while my son makes an evening of it.
Your usual tongue through your cheek, licking your lobe good stuff, Dean!
A couple of oooops, I'm sure others have pointed out to you by now.
My had went up... [misspell]
whadda'ya you guys think?" [ya with you sounds weird]
clam demeanor was clearly being compromised. [Clam? misspell]
I know there'll be more toward All Hallow ed's Eve.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
