I Couldn't See the Moon
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Comment from Tonulak
Hi Brooke,
Another lovely poem. A nice message, too; a belief in the unseen through it's actions. Great job with this one--Ted
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Another lovely poem. A nice message, too; a belief in the unseen through it's actions. Great job with this one--Ted
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Ted :-) Brooke
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words were strong, convincing and deep. The reader pondered on the theme of this poem while thinking about believing before seeing. The artwork was perfect and complimented the theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Excellent Poem! The poem flows and connects well. The author's words were strong, convincing and deep. The reader pondered on the theme of this poem while thinking about believing before seeing. The artwork was perfect and complimented the theme of this poem.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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harmony, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from SteveY
Another excellent poem full of poetic rhyme and rhythm. Wonderful descriptive message makes one feel as if they are right there experiencing it.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Another excellent poem full of poetic rhyme and rhythm. Wonderful descriptive message makes one feel as if they are right there experiencing it.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, Steve :-) Brooke
Comment from INtity
This is a gorgeous piece! The sentiments of a blinded man or woman being a spectator to nature's gloomy allure. Well written masterpiece of nasty looking days.lol
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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This is a gorgeous piece! The sentiments of a blinded man or woman being a spectator to nature's gloomy allure. Well written masterpiece of nasty looking days.lol
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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INtity, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Allieas
Beautiful poem. It reminds me of so many things, for some reason it especially reminds me of the love of a good friend. Maybe you drift apart and don't speak often, but they are always still there when it matters, just as the moon or sun is there even when you can't see their light. Thanks for sharing this.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Beautiful poem. It reminds me of so many things, for some reason it especially reminds me of the love of a good friend. Maybe you drift apart and don't speak often, but they are always still there when it matters, just as the moon or sun is there even when you can't see their light. Thanks for sharing this.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Alexandra, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from judiverse
Sometimes our vision does get clouded over or fogged up, as you suggest. Still, the moon and the sun are still there, even though they're obscured for a while. I love the reference to the sleeping fawn being warmed by hidden rays. The animals and flowers continue their busy activity. Wonderful, optimist thought that there is still hope amidst clouds of doubt. Excellent rhyme ABCB. It flows smoothly as your work always does. judi
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Sometimes our vision does get clouded over or fogged up, as you suggest. Still, the moon and the sun are still there, even though they're obscured for a while. I love the reference to the sleeping fawn being warmed by hidden rays. The animals and flowers continue their busy activity. Wonderful, optimist thought that there is still hope amidst clouds of doubt. Excellent rhyme ABCB. It flows smoothly as your work always does. judi
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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thank you so very much, Judi, for your insightful reading of this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from jaeladarling
Because the fog, like everything else, will pass. :) This is a great picture of hope in the midst of gloom - something I'm sure many of us can relate to. Nicely written, and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Because the fog, like everything else, will pass. :) This is a great picture of hope in the midst of gloom - something I'm sure many of us can relate to. Nicely written, and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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jaeladarling, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from MissMerri
This is a beautifully written poem with an important message. Even though we don't always see what is happening (or the causes behind the happenings) we can still have faith that what is important is still occurring beyond our sight. I liked every verse.... couldn't possibly pick a favorite. Simply a wonderful, thoughtful poem.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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This is a beautifully written poem with an important message. Even though we don't always see what is happening (or the causes behind the happenings) we can still have faith that what is important is still occurring beyond our sight. I liked every verse.... couldn't possibly pick a favorite. Simply a wonderful, thoughtful poem.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Adonna, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
"When I can't see what still is there for dark looms all about, I think about the flow of tides and set aside my doubt." - This last stanza is especially lovely as it encapsulates everything that faith is about. This is wonderfully written and a delightful read. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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"When I can't see what still is there for dark looms all about, I think about the flow of tides and set aside my doubt." - This last stanza is especially lovely as it encapsulates everything that faith is about. This is wonderfully written and a delightful read. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Mystic Angel, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
This poem makes very logical observations. It is well written and the rhythmical flow is excellent. You have done a wonderful job on this delightful poem.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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This poem makes very logical observations. It is well written and the rhythmical flow is excellent. You have done a wonderful job on this delightful poem.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke
