I Couldn't See the Moon
quatrains in 8/6/8/6166 total reviews
Comment from Charlieboy123
Let the winds blow
let the clouds come
let the fog roll in
I will no be at want
I will not be dismayed
I will not be downcast
I will life up my eyes for I have my Lord Jesus
I have my Family and Friends
I have my cup of tea to share with thee on this cold, windy, wonderful day.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Let the winds blow
let the clouds come
let the fog roll in
I will no be at want
I will not be dismayed
I will not be downcast
I will life up my eyes for I have my Lord Jesus
I have my Family and Friends
I have my cup of tea to share with thee on this cold, windy, wonderful day.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Charlieboy, for reading though I'm not quite sure what you thought of my writing based on your review. Brooke
Comment from Gargantuan2
Very nice, and thanks for the imagery in weather once again. I agree that this painting is very nice, it's not too bright and not too gloomy. Something I would not mind waking to.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Very nice, and thanks for the imagery in weather once again. I agree that this painting is very nice, it's not too bright and not too gloomy. Something I would not mind waking to.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Gargantuan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Brooke,
Funny, this poem reminded me that on both the occasions when we have been supposed to see the 'big moon' this year, it has been heavily overcast here and we couldn't ...
Patrick
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Funny, this poem reminded me that on both the occasions when we have been supposed to see the 'big moon' this year, it has been heavily overcast here and we couldn't ...
Patrick
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Patrick, thanks so much. Hardly seems fair, does it? :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Nicely done Brooke,
Yes, it is amazing that, whether we see the moon or the sun, they are still in the heavens doing what they were designed to do. I enjoyed reading this one.
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Nicely done Brooke,
Yes, it is amazing that, whether we see the moon or the sun, they are still in the heavens doing what they were designed to do. I enjoyed reading this one.
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Carolyn, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from honeytree
I love the art work very much here and the words written.
Everything like the moon, the clouds, sun, fog
are there for us to see but sometimes
can be difficult to see.
The gifts we receive from nature
are gifts we will always remember.
honey tree
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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I love the art work very much here and the words written.
Everything like the moon, the clouds, sun, fog
are there for us to see but sometimes
can be difficult to see.
The gifts we receive from nature
are gifts we will always remember.
honey tree
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Annie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
This is a lovely poem, and I really enjoyed the read, Brooke. We don't have to see God to know he created us and all the wonders of nature. An absolutely stunning piece of artwork to compliment your words.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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This is a lovely poem, and I really enjoyed the read, Brooke. We don't have to see God to know he created us and all the wonders of nature. An absolutely stunning piece of artwork to compliment your words.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much for your insightful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Delahay
These are things we don't have to take on faith. The tide is rising, the moon is there, even if we can't see it for the clouds. We also know the sun has risen even though the fog obscures our view.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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These are things we don't have to take on faith. The tide is rising, the moon is there, even if we can't see it for the clouds. We also know the sun has risen even though the fog obscures our view.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
Thank you, WardHays, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
It is amazing how important the moon is to earth. Without it, we would not have our seasons, and life would be quite different on earth. As always, this is very well written.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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It is amazing how important the moon is to earth. Without it, we would not have our seasons, and life would be quite different on earth. As always, this is very well written.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Your quaitrains sing a lovely song throughout your perfectly written lines. The imagery leaves me in a peaceful place, so much so that the added artwork isn't even needed. I like what I see in my mind's eye.
So good to read you again. Your skill inspires me.
Jewell
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Your quaitrains sing a lovely song throughout your perfectly written lines. The imagery leaves me in a peaceful place, so much so that the added artwork isn't even needed. I like what I see in my mind's eye.
So good to read you again. Your skill inspires me.
Jewell
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Jewell, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Bina1
What a lovely thought, you always come up with the best ideas! Just the usual things of daily life, and you turn them into a beautiful poem!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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What a lovely thought, you always come up with the best ideas! Just the usual things of daily life, and you turn them into a beautiful poem!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Bina, thanks so much :-) Brooke
