I Couldn't See the Moon
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Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Brooke. What a beautiful piece of poetry this is, so descriptive. Your use of alliteration is perfect and very effective. The artwork is very apt too.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke. What a beautiful piece of poetry this is, so descriptive. Your use of alliteration is perfect and very effective. The artwork is very apt too.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Wendy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Lulube
a dark and dismal day. But clever thinking for the tides to reassure you that the moon is still around. Well penned and great rhyming
lulube
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a dark and dismal day. But clever thinking for the tides to reassure you that the moon is still around. Well penned and great rhyming
lulube
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Lulube, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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welcome
lulube
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
Well, I got my interpretation wrong on your last one, so let's see if I come close to your meaning.
I think this can be speaking to how important it is for us to have faith. Just because we don't see God, doesn't mean He has abandoned us during difficult times.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke,
Well, I got my interpretation wrong on your last one, so let's see if I come close to your meaning.
I think this can be speaking to how important it is for us to have faith. Just because we don't see God, doesn't mean He has abandoned us during difficult times.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Lou, thank you so much :-) Yep, that works for me :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
Painting is lovely.
Many levels of though and ideas here.
Reads well and make sense.
Has nice flow and feeling.
Many will relate and understand.
Well done.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Painting is lovely.
Many levels of though and ideas here.
Reads well and make sense.
Has nice flow and feeling.
Many will relate and understand.
Well done.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Maddie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
Lovely, Brooke! Faith in things we cannot see. Not always easy, but an absolute requirement in today's world. It can get pretty heavy out there. Loved your choice of artwork, too. Summer's end always makes me sigh!
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Lovely, Brooke! Faith in things we cannot see. Not always easy, but an absolute requirement in today's world. It can get pretty heavy out there. Loved your choice of artwork, too. Summer's end always makes me sigh!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Adrienne, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An interesting and well written series of quatrains.
It is so encouraging to realise the reassurance that can
be gained simply by reading the signs that nature sends
I like the imagery within the words and how the scene was set to provide peace and reassurance that all is well.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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An interesting and well written series of quatrains.
It is so encouraging to realise the reassurance that can
be gained simply by reading the signs that nature sends
I like the imagery within the words and how the scene was set to provide peace and reassurance that all is well.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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seken, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sonaleeka
one of the best poem I came across.Really find it amazing.
Very refreshing and worth reading.Thanks for sharing.
God bless!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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one of the best poem I came across.Really find it amazing.
Very refreshing and worth reading.Thanks for sharing.
God bless!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Sonaleeka, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'I Couldn't See the Moon' is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
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'I Couldn't See the Moon' is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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duchess, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Brooke, you're more than welcome:-)the Duchess
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi Brooke, this is another delightful poem i have enjoyed reading, I love poems about the Sun and the Moon. It is true that they may not always be visible to us but we know they are there and we can depend on them
Well written
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke, this is another delightful poem i have enjoyed reading, I love poems about the Sun and the Moon. It is true that they may not always be visible to us but we know they are there and we can depend on them
Well written
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014
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Mary, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
The small ballad resonates with faith, the tireless metaphor, light. This one caused me to think of the ocean at Jax Beach. Kenny
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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The small ballad resonates with faith, the tireless metaphor, light. This one caused me to think of the ocean at Jax Beach. Kenny
Comment Written 17-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
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Kenny thank you so much :-) Brooke
