I Couldn't See the Moon
quatrains in 8/6/8/6166 total reviews
Comment from tedanytime
An excellent verse describing the fog and the assurance of the tides that keep rolling in.
Very fine rhythm and rhyming lines.
There are some that doubt when trouble and sorrow cast shadows on the soul...this verse is one of encouragement.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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An excellent verse describing the fog and the assurance of the tides that keep rolling in.
Very fine rhythm and rhyming lines.
There are some that doubt when trouble and sorrow cast shadows on the soul...this verse is one of encouragement.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Ted, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from words
A perfect poem, Brooke.
Reading you always restores my faith in the site.
Such an elegant expression of Hope and faith.
You have set my day up perfectly.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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A perfect poem, Brooke.
Reading you always restores my faith in the site.
Such an elegant expression of Hope and faith.
You have set my day up perfectly.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Diane, thank you so much, my friend. I am particularly proud of this poem, so I'm thrilled you like it enough to honor it with a sixth star :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I love this one Brooke. Maybe because it is about the moon and ocean tides. The imagery is so vivid I was seeing what you saw as you were writing and the picture and presentation... so
beautiful I just had to award the poem a six. Well done! Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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I love this one Brooke. Maybe because it is about the moon and ocean tides. The imagery is so vivid I was seeing what you saw as you were writing and the picture and presentation... so
beautiful I just had to award the poem a six. Well done! Nancy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Nancy, thank you so very much for your generous and gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
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It is lovely!
Comment from Dean Kuch
Those things well feel; like the the wind, or divine intervention on our behalf, but cannot see, are no less less real than those we can see with our eyes. They make their presence known through other diverse methods, but they are still there, nonetheless.
A wonderfully uplifting poem to start off a dreary Tuesday morning.
Well done, Brooke!
~Dean
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Those things well feel; like the the wind, or divine intervention on our behalf, but cannot see, are no less less real than those we can see with our eyes. They make their presence known through other diverse methods, but they are still there, nonetheless.
A wonderfully uplifting poem to start off a dreary Tuesday morning.
Well done, Brooke!
~Dean
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Dean :-) Brooke
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Comment from Bryana
I really didn't know what to do if look
at Sawyer or read your poem, they are both
a pleasure.
We know there are many things that we don't
but we know they are there, like the sun and
the moon when they hide behind the clouds.
Lovely poem dear Brooke.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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I really didn't know what to do if look
at Sawyer or read your poem, they are both
a pleasure.
We know there are many things that we don't
but we know they are there, like the sun and
the moon when they hide behind the clouds.
Lovely poem dear Brooke.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Bryana :-) Brooke
Comment from Matoshka
Your writing is so awesome, always so full of strong emotions. I loved how this felt to my soul, Brooke. I love the thought when dark looms about, to think of the ebb of the tides setting aside all doubt. Blessings
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Your writing is so awesome, always so full of strong emotions. I loved how this felt to my soul, Brooke. I love the thought when dark looms about, to think of the ebb of the tides setting aside all doubt. Blessings
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Matoshka, for your gracious and generous response to this poem. I am particularly proud of this one, so I truly appreciate your comments :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome, it is a wonderful release. Blessings
Comment from marijmd
This is a very tranquil poem at the end. It was like knowing things are not always able to be controlled but taking comfort in the guarantees in life.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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This is a very tranquil poem at the end. It was like knowing things are not always able to be controlled but taking comfort in the guarantees in life.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Mary, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: the rhythm of your poetry is so calming to me. It feels like slowing rocking a baby to sleep . . . with a smile on his/her face. Lovely piece and picture. Linda
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Brooke: the rhythm of your poetry is so calming to me. It feels like slowing rocking a baby to sleep . . . with a smile on his/her face. Lovely piece and picture. Linda
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from flamingstar
Great point about all that's being orchestrated behind the scenes or hovering beneath our level of awareness. Frankly, I'm glad I can't see everything or I'd be paralyzed with fear.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Great point about all that's being orchestrated behind the scenes or hovering beneath our level of awareness. Frankly, I'm glad I can't see everything or I'd be paralyzed with fear.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, flamingstar :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
Fabulous quatrains , expressing one of those days and nights , no moon
no sun , but nature keeps given the signals of their close presence behind the fog. Such wonderful imagery !!! Pili
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Fabulous quatrains , expressing one of those days and nights , no moon
no sun , but nature keeps given the signals of their close presence behind the fog. Such wonderful imagery !!! Pili
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Pili, thank you so much, my generous and gracious friend :-) Brooke
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Love your poems, ;:-). Pili
