Puss in boots
5-7-5 witty animal contest6 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I'm still cracking up over the photograph--clever and a half! You managed to equal the humor with your monolog and its surprising ending. Best wishes in the contest--witty indeed! LOL -Joan
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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I'm still cracking up over the photograph--clever and a half! You managed to equal the humor with your monolog and its surprising ending. Best wishes in the contest--witty indeed! LOL -Joan
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
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Thanks Joan but the contest is well over, I still appreciate you review and am glad you find it funny. one of my reviews gave a four because if the picture was not there the poem would mean nothing. I do agree with him, but when the prompt ask for a funny witty 5-7-5 poem and creative ones, we are not expected to write a proper haiku. Maybe my thinking on it is wrong.???
Comment from mauial
The poem is witty only with the picture. Without it one would wonder what is this about. A poem should stand on its own merit, the word art of the poet and not the picture.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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The poem is witty only with the picture. Without it one would wonder what is this about. A poem should stand on its own merit, the word art of the poet and not the picture.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thanks for your review and comments
Comment from ChrisMcLaughlin
Excellent blend of picture and verse. Fun, feel good poem that captures the feeling of the moment. Fine entry for this contest.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Excellent blend of picture and verse. Fun, feel good poem that captures the feeling of the moment. Fine entry for this contest.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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thanks for the excellent review.
Comment from RYME4U
Very witty and well written. I like the adorable picture and the reference to the song is well done. You have tied it all together in a clever way. Good job!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Very witty and well written. I like the adorable picture and the reference to the song is well done. You have tied it all together in a clever way. Good job!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thanks for the great review. and comments.
Comment from linsbm
You bought my smile quickly...so nice and cute. I loved to see them. Even animals know what is happening around them. They think like us.
You did an excellent job in writing this witty poem. Syllable count of 5-7-5 is perfect. Excellent. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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You bought my smile quickly...so nice and cute. I loved to see them. Even animals know what is happening around them. They think like us.
You did an excellent job in writing this witty poem. Syllable count of 5-7-5 is perfect. Excellent. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.} Lin
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the excellent review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is cute, mystery writer, and I love the picture, it's just adorable. I think I would make it we're not moving instead of were not moving since you have were in the second line. good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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this is cute, mystery writer, and I love the picture, it's just adorable. I think I would make it we're not moving instead of were not moving since you have were in the second line. good luck in the contest
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
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Thanks for the pointing out the missing apostrophe I really appreciate your review too.
