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senryu (some days are like)

satirical humor

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Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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LOL!

Love the photo! It took a day or two to get that build up. Seems like there is always something that gets stuck way in the back for six months before its found.

Fun poem. Hope you got the frig cleaned out, so now you can start all over!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie
Comment from DSMalott
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LOL,LOL.
This is so true and so well expressed in such short lines and phrases. Is this a satire of life or of all of our cluttered refrigerators? :) Probably both.
Nicely done.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Wendyanne
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I have many moldy bread days lol so I can understand what you are saying. Your amusing little senryu made me smile. It's strange what inspires a poem.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie
Comment from lakeport
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some days are, indeed some days are very frustrating, that's a very nice expressed Senryu poem.Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Lakeport.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie
reply by lakeport on 17-Sep-2014
    your welcome,Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
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I'll say! Excellent commentary on bread bins as well. If you really want the loaf to not rot, may I suggest the fridge? But oh, that picture. Kenny

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie
Comment from BCScot
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Well that pretty much covers it! We all have those days of moldy bread, good thing it's not all life is about eh? Thanks for sharing!

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 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie
Comment from Deniz22
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You get six just for cleaning out your refrigerator. By the looks of the bread, it sure looks like it needed it. Too much time on FanStory perhaps? :)I bet somewhere on the web you could find a recipe for using this bread...

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you. Glad you enjoyed, my friend~Debbie