Just if you believe
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Comment from honeytree
I like the art work here for the words written.
Time is a word that can change very much within our lives.
We can change what we did yesterday
We can look forward for today and tomorrow.
honey tree
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I like the art work here for the words written.
Time is a word that can change very much within our lives.
We can change what we did yesterday
We can look forward for today and tomorrow.
honey tree
Comment Written 16-Sep-2014
Comment from djsaxon
OK. Evocative write and almost most of it resonates. I have a problem with this:
Sun dries the lost
And I walk slowly in the wine ('past the empty glass' maybe?)
Table bare of fate
With the greatest respect. It is a good poem - DJ
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OK. Evocative write and almost most of it resonates. I have a problem with this:
Sun dries the lost
And I walk slowly in the wine ('past the empty glass' maybe?)
Table bare of fate
With the greatest respect. It is a good poem - DJ
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
Comment from Zinnia48
I love the way you toss up words and wander thru them, picking up pieces and rearranging them It reminds me a little of "word salad", but with a definite sense of purpose. Thanks, again! Caroline
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I love the way you toss up words and wander thru them, picking up pieces and rearranging them It reminds me a little of "word salad", but with a definite sense of purpose. Thanks, again! Caroline
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
