A Storm Came Crashing
a rispetto147 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Brooke,
I really like this a lot. I saw the lighthouse and it called to me. Love them. The first two lines are awesome.
If I were rich, I'd remodel an old lighthouse and live in it. But, since I'm not monetarily rich, I shall keep the home I have! (*<*)
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke,
I really like this a lot. I saw the lighthouse and it called to me. Love them. The first two lines are awesome.
If I were rich, I'd remodel an old lighthouse and live in it. But, since I'm not monetarily rich, I shall keep the home I have! (*<*)
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*<*)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Jax, thank you so much:-) I love lighthouses too - when I lived in New England we always vacationed in Maine and made the rounds of lighthouses, and my favorite park in New Haven, where I lived, was Lighthouse Point. Brooke
Comment from madhatter1977
Hi Brooke, this seems to be an excellent rispetto! I like the flow of this one and it's very dramatic too with the storm at sea. The art is beautiful and your formatting matches the picture well. Another great poem from you! Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke, this seems to be an excellent rispetto! I like the flow of this one and it's very dramatic too with the storm at sea. The art is beautiful and your formatting matches the picture well. Another great poem from you! Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Pete, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from mauial
Again another great poem. I like the personification of storm having a soul and the thought that the starfish prayed. Good alliteration with came crashing and starfish sighed.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Again another great poem. I like the personification of storm having a soul and the thought that the starfish prayed. Good alliteration with came crashing and starfish sighed.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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mauial, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jay Squires
Wow, Brooke, this is in a bit of a different mode for you, isn't it? Even though it's nature's violence, I'm not used to seeing the absence of symmetry in the theme of your poetry.
May I still say this is a refreshing departure?
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Wow, Brooke, this is in a bit of a different mode for you, isn't it? Even though it's nature's violence, I'm not used to seeing the absence of symmetry in the theme of your poetry.
May I still say this is a refreshing departure?
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh, Poor little starfish. No Match for the mighty storm roaring until it was satisfied it was freed of all it's pent up tensions. LOL Well done rispetto Brooke. Nice picture.
xsx Nancy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Oh, Poor little starfish. No Match for the mighty storm roaring until it was satisfied it was freed of all it's pent up tensions. LOL Well done rispetto Brooke. Nice picture.
xsx Nancy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
nice piece of poetic art! very descriptive and fine personification! love the elements! and how the sea waves die after a period of roaring.
thank you for sharing!
may god and love bless you always!
rebekka x
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nice piece of poetic art! very descriptive and fine personification! love the elements! and how the sea waves die after a period of roaring.
thank you for sharing!
may god and love bless you always!
rebekka x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I don't remember you doing a rispetto in quite some time. This uses very powerful action verbs and paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind. Have a great week, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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I don't remember you doing a rispetto in quite some time. This uses very powerful action verbs and paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind. Have a great week, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014
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Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Tonulak
Dear Brooke, you did a very nice job with this respetto . Your poem addresses the surface of the storm and also, how it affects the lowly sea horse. Great job on this one--Ted
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Dear Brooke, you did a very nice job with this respetto . Your poem addresses the surface of the storm and also, how it affects the lowly sea horse. Great job on this one--Ted
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Ted, thank you so much. Jimi just expressed concern to me because there have been no Maureen updates for a few days. Do you know if she is OK? Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Oh a sad wee one, though full of the power of the great ocean. I liked the rhyme skeme for this...like waves bash and breath, bash and breath...then bash bash...and recede recede.
Ok, so I am a little fanciful today, but that is what I first felt, silly or not...padumachitta
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Hi. Oh a sad wee one, though full of the power of the great ocean. I liked the rhyme skeme for this...like waves bash and breath, bash and breath...then bash bash...and recede recede.
Ok, so I am a little fanciful today, but that is what I first felt, silly or not...padumachitta
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
Very well done. I can just picture those star fish being swept away by waves. This rispetto is well rhymed and has an even word flow. I liked the ending.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Very well done. I can just picture those star fish being swept away by waves. This rispetto is well rhymed and has an even word flow. I liked the ending.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke
