Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Sad memories left behind shows the healing powers of the moon. Excellent naani form that creates the moon as a character with a warm glow. Vivid use of words makes this poem come alive.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Thank you sooooo much for your terrific comment. Pili

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Love wounds repairs...I do not really understand...is love the cause of wounds or repairs...it's a paradox..if I were to choose..I'd say love repairs,,,it always has with me,,,
God bless

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Thank you so very much my friend, the moon repair... Smiles. Pili

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Hi, Pili.

I must be honest and admit I don't fully understand this, with the upmost respect.

Maybe, 'love repairs wounds' would be clearer, unless I'm missing another message - which wouldn't be for the first time. :-)

I certainly sense a mood of renewal and positivity.

Best wishes, Ray xx



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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Moon repair love wounds... I took the s... Thank you so much my friend. Pili

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Great Naani poetry. Love the art work. It looks abstract until you take a good look and see that it's not. Like, also, the navy blue background color that resembles a mid night sky.

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 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014

Love your comment thank you so very much. Pili