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Moon Repair

Naani

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Comment from ana10
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Very good abstract poem of the night ,the moon and love.Maybe darkness and night and silver light can repair our wounds of love if you let reach us and then our sad memories will no longer be. We never know how the moon and its veils will repair our woundedlove but it will.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much , interesting review Ana... Pili
Comment from onebrit
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Oh Miss Pili how did I miss this beautiful piece. The moonlight is so beautiful, full of magic and possibilities for those with eyes to see such things. I think ethereal has to be my favorite word. Less is always more. Just lovely.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    What a wonderful comment, thank you so much onebrit. Pili
Comment from jaeladarling
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It's amazing how much can be packed into such a short piece. And anything using the word "ethereal" is awesome in my book. :) Love the stepping out from sad stage and into a better one. Nice transition. Great work - thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Pili
Comment from ragamuffin
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A very interesting and appropriate picture you've used to accompany your poem.
This is a lovely piece that certainly does have a bit of a supernatural feel to it. Perhaps such a lovely sight as the midnight sky lit by the moon does have healing powers to it. Well done.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you Ragamuffing for a terrific review. Pili
Comment from ravenblack
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The moon of lovers, always mysterious and , when we really look at it, restorative of our awe. Beautiful naani. Just a few suggestions - moon's ethereal veils/ tendrils of silver light/love's wounds repair/ sad memories left behind.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Grateful for the suggestions and terrific comments, all done. Thank you again Pili
Comment from Charlieboy123
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Yes I see your poetry, your matching artwork so I must say back in a poem~

Oh sweet sorrow bliss, love yes sweet love I dearly miss
Return to me this sorrowful night, ya my dear hearts delight.

I can live without many a things love sweet love is not on this list.

Where can my love be found must I wonder this hollow ground?




 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Hey, I like your poem Charlie, thank you so much. Pili
Comment from honeytree
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I love the art work here for these words.

Amazing how love can be spread around

in many places helping the healing process.

honey tree

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you Honeytree , love your comment. Pili
Comment from INtity
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Very well written, I may find myself writing Naani poems in the near future. Most of my writing is long so I'm thinking of doing this. Anyways..... I can feel the sorrow in this with nature's sympathy and/or understanding.Great job.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much INtity, great comment. Pili
Comment from SteveY
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So beautifully descriptive with so few lines. You have a talent for this style of poetry for sure. Apparently many others feel the same way.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much Steve Y, great comment. Pili
Comment from padumachitta
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Hi...this is such a nice naani...it is full of positive images, of life and going forward.
The sad memories left behind, the pain healing, the moon in his spendor, great images.
padumachitta

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

reply by the author on 16-Sep-2014
    Thank you so much padumachitta, great comment. Pili