To Love Again
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Comment from Dean Kuch
I don't know Brian, Sandra, but I do know this. As much as you both obviously loved each other, I doubt very seriously that he would begrudge you a chance at having someone in your life who loves you dearly. In fact, I would bet that it makes him extremely happy to see you happy.
This was a poignantly beautiful poem, and so very well written. Excellent meter and rhyme...you should do extremely well in the contest.
Best of luck. :}
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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I don't know Brian, Sandra, but I do know this. As much as you both obviously loved each other, I doubt very seriously that he would begrudge you a chance at having someone in your life who loves you dearly. In fact, I would bet that it makes him extremely happy to see you happy.
This was a poignantly beautiful poem, and so very well written. Excellent meter and rhyme...you should do extremely well in the contest.
Best of luck. :}
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much, Dean, for your wonderful words. I have always felt Brian approved. The sun shone all weekend when I remarried, on the 13th (unlucky for some) of October, a month that is always cold and miserable! Thank you, again, my wonderful friend. xsx Sandra
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It was my pleasure, Sandra. You are very welcome. :}
Comment from James Dooney
Ah yes I do like this one indeed. Every one can have a day like this one from time to time. We just gotta plod our way through huh ! well done.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Ah yes I do like this one indeed. Every one can have a day like this one from time to time. We just gotta plod our way through huh ! well done.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you, James, for your lovely review and wonderful words. I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. :) xsx Sandra
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is very beautiful Sandra. Of course I understand the pain of loss. You were still young enough to find love again.That is always a good thing.
You wrote in perfect pentameter and aabb rhyme. Lovely picture and presentation. xsx Nancy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This is very beautiful Sandra. Of course I understand the pain of loss. You were still young enough to find love again.That is always a good thing.
You wrote in perfect pentameter and aabb rhyme. Lovely picture and presentation. xsx Nancy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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I know you understand, Nancy. Thank you for your lovely words and for the 6 stars. Hey, what's a pentameter??? LOL. xsx Sandra
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You are kidding aren't you? It is 10 syllables per line. daDum daDum daDum daDum daDum. five feet.
Comment from Nosha17
That's a lovely heart-warming poem., Sandra, how lovely for you, you expressed your emotions so well. Excellent rhyming and well chosen words to convey your message. Good luck in the contest. Fayex
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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That's a lovely heart-warming poem., Sandra, how lovely for you, you expressed your emotions so well. Excellent rhyming and well chosen words to convey your message. Good luck in the contest. Fayex
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Faye. What a lovely thing to say, and thanks for the good luck wishes! xsx sandra
Comment from ronnie k
A perfect smooth rhyming work of poetry, the idea found within, love is forever, if there is are was true love it transcends to living in happiness "if you love someone you want them to be happy, forever" thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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A perfect smooth rhyming work of poetry, the idea found within, love is forever, if there is are was true love it transcends to living in happiness "if you love someone you want them to be happy, forever" thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Ronnie, for you wonderful words. I do believe what you say is true. Thank you. xsx sandra
Comment from zanya
What a wonderful tale of finding love a second time following the death of your beloved - with family and friends rejoicing - the pain and loss of widowhood is overwhelming - I am still coming to terms with being a widow 5 years on - Congratulations and best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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What a wonderful tale of finding love a second time following the death of your beloved - with family and friends rejoicing - the pain and loss of widowhood is overwhelming - I am still coming to terms with being a widow 5 years on - Congratulations and best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Zanya, so much for your lovely review, and I am so sorry for your loss. I know how hard it is to get up and get going again. It takes a long time. I wish you much happiness in your future. xsx sandra
Comment from stroncoso1
What a beautiful and touching poem. It is very well written and heartfelt. I like your story told so poetically. You rhymed it well and it flows very smoothly into the next verse. It is a lovely poem about love, and so much more. I wish you well in the contest. This is a gem of a poem. Nice job! I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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What a beautiful and touching poem. It is very well written and heartfelt. I like your story told so poetically. You rhymed it well and it flows very smoothly into the next verse. It is a lovely poem about love, and so much more. I wish you well in the contest. This is a gem of a poem. Nice job! I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. I wrote it so others might know you are allowed to love again, or be happy. Thank you also for wishing me well in the contest. xsx Sandra
Comment from amahra
Love the art work that you chose for this writing. It's very colorful and soft. I also liked the poem mostly for its rhyming and rhythm.
I reached across and stroked the pillow case
And knew I would no longer see his face [these lines were deeply felt]
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Love the art work that you chose for this writing. It's very colorful and soft. I also liked the poem mostly for its rhyming and rhythm.
I reached across and stroked the pillow case
And knew I would no longer see his face [these lines were deeply felt]
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Amahra, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. xsx Sandra
Comment from JudyS
Sandra, Congratulations on finding love again, best of luck to you. Awesome poem, excellent job, loved the read. Thanks so much for sharing it. Judy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Sandra, Congratulations on finding love again, best of luck to you. Awesome poem, excellent job, loved the read. Thanks so much for sharing it. Judy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Judy, for the wonderful review, the golden 6 stars, and also for the congratulations! I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem. xsx Sandra
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
So you remarried? Why didn't I know that? Guess it never occurred to me. Or my tired old brain just forgot. What a beautiful story in this poem, all the more special because it's not fiction. Belated congratulations. :)
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So you remarried? Why didn't I know that? Guess it never occurred to me. Or my tired old brain just forgot. What a beautiful story in this poem, all the more special because it's not fiction. Belated congratulations. :)
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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I am sure I told you, LOL, you are getting like me! Thank you, Phyllis. I was 39 when Brian died, I honestly never thought I would get married again. It's too painful when you lose someone you love. Then I thought, hang on, I could go first next time! Or something like that! Have you got my next page written yet??? xxxxx
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No new chapter... might take a day off. I just got a diff idea for it and need to give it some thought. I don't know if Gary should find Tara on the bridge BEFORE she jumps, or arrive in time to see her leaping to her death.
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You had me going there! Then I realised it was just Phyllis being...Phyllis! LOL xxx
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