The Rainbow in Me
Accepting His Promises21 total reviews
Comment from kiwijenny
He fashions a promise so true
that the rain and the sun mixed together
make a covenant we can make, too.
I have never thought about this before that the rainbow is made by sun and rain...and therefore a metaphor good times bad times...love this
God bless
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He fashions a promise so true
that the rain and the sun mixed together
make a covenant we can make, too.
I have never thought about this before that the rainbow is made by sun and rain...and therefore a metaphor good times bad times...love this
God bless
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A lovely spiritual poem
that speaks of God's creations
and the gifts he offers us free...
love the rainbow cat also.
good luck with the contest.
Margaret
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A lovely spiritual poem
that speaks of God's creations
and the gifts he offers us free...
love the rainbow cat also.
good luck with the contest.
Margaret
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from katinka
That poem blessed me in it's simplicity yet it is from the heart and spiritual understanding. I especially lied the second stanza.
There may be other things to mention but for me at was a good read. Thanks.
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That poem blessed me in it's simplicity yet it is from the heart and spiritual understanding. I especially lied the second stanza.
There may be other things to mention but for me at was a good read. Thanks.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from Nosha17
I like the way you have compared life with a multi-faceted rainbow. Good use of metaphorical and descriptive language to convey your message. It also conveys that the rainbow has a spiritual effect on us. Enjoyable read and good luck in the contest. Faye
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I like the way you have compared life with a multi-faceted rainbow. Good use of metaphorical and descriptive language to convey your message. It also conveys that the rainbow has a spiritual effect on us. Enjoyable read and good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Nicely done very readable in its meter and form, four stanzas of rhyming and great faith in eye opening response to Him and to His plans for us.
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Nicely done very readable in its meter and form, four stanzas of rhyming and great faith in eye opening response to Him and to His plans for us.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from Dawny53
Nice work, an enjoyable read. You did well with the flow of this poem throughout, it was written simply and beautifully. One of my favorite type of writing style
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Nice work, an enjoyable read. You did well with the flow of this poem throughout, it was written simply and beautifully. One of my favorite type of writing style
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
"His promise is rich as His rainbow. His plan is as wide as the sea. His crayons of faith and renewal bring colors that soothe you and me." - This stanza is the best by far as it totally captures the essence of the rainbow's promise with ease and simplicity. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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"His promise is rich as His rainbow. His plan is as wide as the sea. His crayons of faith and renewal bring colors that soothe you and me." - This stanza is the best by far as it totally captures the essence of the rainbow's promise with ease and simplicity. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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What nice words you shared with me. I am honored, and I thank you for my smile.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
How I wish that this poem is classified as a spiritual poem which it is. I love the progression and the linking pace of the poem from stanza to stanza. A very well tailored thoughts, well delivered.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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How I wish that this poem is classified as a spiritual poem which it is. I love the progression and the linking pace of the poem from stanza to stanza. A very well tailored thoughts, well delivered.
ola thomas
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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I wondered how to classify it, and you share my thoughts. Bless you for your comments.
Comment from stroncoso1
"The Rainbow in Me" is a lovely poem that rhymes well and comes through in its inspiring and uplifting message. "His promise is rich as His rainbow" is a line that connects everything in your poem. The reference to His crayons and mixing the good and tough times comes through as positive lines in your verses, leaving the reader with a sense of hope and a powerful reminder of God's promise.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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"The Rainbow in Me" is a lovely poem that rhymes well and comes through in its inspiring and uplifting message. "His promise is rich as His rainbow" is a line that connects everything in your poem. The reference to His crayons and mixing the good and tough times comes through as positive lines in your verses, leaving the reader with a sense of hope and a powerful reminder of God's promise.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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I hope you have a wonderful day, because you made mine.
Comment from BiPolar Katniss
This poem is beautifully written, and the picture matches it so well. I am impressed by the writing style. It painted a picture for me. It made me think about my life, and how true this poem is about God's promises. He does give us hardship and then he gives us a prize, love and forgiveness and eternal life, for getting through it. Keep going!
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This poem is beautifully written, and the picture matches it so well. I am impressed by the writing style. It painted a picture for me. It made me think about my life, and how true this poem is about God's promises. He does give us hardship and then he gives us a prize, love and forgiveness and eternal life, for getting through it. Keep going!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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First of all, my sincere thanks for your words. Second, I like your pen-name. It made me smile.
