Rainbow: God's Palette
rainbow contest entry11 total reviews
Comment from Carrie Carson
light and water intertwined...I've never heard science expressed so beautifully.
This format I don't know enough about to critique, in truth. I just know that I really like the imagery in this piece.
Good luck in the contest, gorgeous even after I covered the picture. :) Carrie
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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light and water intertwined...I've never heard science expressed so beautifully.
This format I don't know enough about to critique, in truth. I just know that I really like the imagery in this piece.
Good luck in the contest, gorgeous even after I covered the picture. :) Carrie
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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THANK YOU. Yes, I am shouting.
Comment from mauial
This is beautifully expressed. I love the words that imprint the beautiful imagery; the palette of colors and light and water intertwined. It is a treasure to behold and where I live people stop on the roads all the time to take pictures of the rainbow.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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This is beautifully expressed. I love the words that imprint the beautiful imagery; the palette of colors and light and water intertwined. It is a treasure to behold and where I live people stop on the roads all the time to take pictures of the rainbow.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
palette of colors
light and water intertwined
treasure to behold
a treasure indeed - so awesome to see.
good luck with the contest.
Margaret
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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palette of colors
light and water intertwined
treasure to behold
a treasure indeed - so awesome to see.
good luck with the contest.
Margaret
Comment Written 15-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
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Thank you for your time reviewing my poem. It is much appreciated.
Comment from LoannaLois
What a picture-perfect-poem in Haiku form. This was a lovely way to write of and depict your idea . The illustration is also such a soft perfect one.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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What a picture-perfect-poem in Haiku form. This was a lovely way to write of and depict your idea . The illustration is also such a soft perfect one.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much. It is appreciated.
Comment from trimple
Hello there
you present a beautifully scripted piece. very much said here in very few words.
A splendid poem
kindest regards
trimple
trimple
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Hello there
you present a beautifully scripted piece. very much said here in very few words.
A splendid poem
kindest regards
trimple
trimple
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for your generous review. It means a great deal to me.
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The pleasure was all mine :)
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is filled with inspirational and amazingly vivid imagery. I give you kudos for entering such a succinct piece in the contest as it is always a risk. You did a marvelous job of conveying the essence of a rainbow in your well chosen and few words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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This is filled with inspirational and amazingly vivid imagery. I give you kudos for entering such a succinct piece in the contest as it is always a risk. You did a marvelous job of conveying the essence of a rainbow in your well chosen and few words. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you for your great and informative review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count and is paired beautifully with the photo
I particularly like your characterization of the rainbow as light and water intertwined Brooke
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count and is paired beautifully with the photo
I particularly like your characterization of the rainbow as light and water intertwined Brooke
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you very much. We do not receive a lot of rain here. So, I look for a rainbow whenever there is the slightest bit of moisture in the air.
Comment from Ben Colder
I think of His promises and the many blessings He has given me and my fellow man. This is a good contest piece. Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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I think of His promises and the many blessings He has given me and my fellow man. This is a good contest piece. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Than you very much. I really appreciate your time.
Comment from Caressa_08
An excellent observation of what a rainbow consist of & too, I would agree that with your creative title, calling your haiku, "Rainbow: God's Palette," is in my eyes, quite accurate & think it to be almost a miracle of sort, as a rainbow, too, can be quite a reassuring sign. Also like your last line that reads, treasure to behold.... Good picture chosen...Best wishes for this entry.
Caressa
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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An excellent observation of what a rainbow consist of & too, I would agree that with your creative title, calling your haiku, "Rainbow: God's Palette," is in my eyes, quite accurate & think it to be almost a miracle of sort, as a rainbow, too, can be quite a reassuring sign. Also like your last line that reads, treasure to behold.... Good picture chosen...Best wishes for this entry.
Caressa
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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You are so kind to review my poem. Thank you.
Comment from rjuselius
"palette of colors
light and water intertwined
treasure to behold"
this is a fine 5-7-5 piece of poetic art! i especially like the second line! not sure about the satori though.. you don't really indicate the satori to the first and second line. i would think what makes the palette of colours and what keeps the light and water intertwined and go from there..
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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"palette of colors
light and water intertwined
treasure to behold"
this is a fine 5-7-5 piece of poetic art! i especially like the second line! not sure about the satori though.. you don't really indicate the satori to the first and second line. i would think what makes the palette of colours and what keeps the light and water intertwined and go from there..
anyhoo, thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you for your time reviewing my poem.
