Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Joy, indeed that's a very lovely expressed poem with an romamtic touch, nice in form,Good luck at the contest, God bless you,lakeport,

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thnaks for a great review zanya

reply by lakeport on 15-Sep-2014

your welcome.Lakeport.

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

And that is a beautiful description of joy. Hand-in-hand under the starry sky - am ready to walk into the backyard now. and no artwork needed for this. Very visual...AT=/

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Okay, I can certainly see this as a simple declaration of what's a sense of joy to you. It's short and sweet and sometimes you need no more than that. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Perfect capture of such a positive emotion....finally:o)
Well done... just staring at the skies...on a starry moonlit night...your hand in mine........yay
God bless

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Yes and thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from DSMalott

Good

Good.
The emotion could have been more dramatically described perhaps but still I enjoyed the piece. This was a simple acrostic and the short lined conveyed well.
Keep it up.,

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thnaks for a great review and for the suggestions zanya