Comment from giovannimariatommaso

Excellent

Definitely stirs up the emotions of peace and serenity under the moonlit sky; two little lovebirds out for a stroll, good luck in the contest.

The writing prompt is Emotions & emotions are what come up in this little ditty.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thank you indeed zanya

reply by giovannimariatommaso on 12-Oct-2014

Y/W GMT

Comment from rrabinow

Excellent

Wonderfully written poem that you wrote for this prompt. Great imagery created with your use of descriptive words. I like how you express joy. I enjoyed reading your poem. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Delighted with this review zanya

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

A short, but very sweet, acrostic at that. Even without her hand in my own, I always experience an awe, a sense of wonderment and joy, when gazing up into a sky full of brilliant, twinkling stars. In fact, it's one of my favorite past times. Looking through a telescope into the heavens can make our place, our time here on planet earth seem small and insignificant. Truly a humbling experience.

Well done, short, sweet and directly to the point.

Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thanks for a great review zanya

reply by Dean Kuch on 16-Sep-2014

Not a problem, zanya. :}

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Hands communicating
Lips no longer conversing
Hearts entangled.
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

thanks for a great review zanya

reply by c_lucas on 15-Sep-2014

You're welcome, Zanya. Charlie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

A solid acrostic for Joy
what a delightful scene you create that captures the spirit of joy in this slice of life poem
good assonance in skies/night/mine
lovely detail of setting
Brooke

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thanks for a great review for this little poem zanya

Comment from livelylinda

Excellent

Author: I think you have described joy in its most simple and pure form. Original idea. Good luck with the contest. livelylinda

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

You've captured a moment of joy in this; it's really an impressionist painting in words as a moment of romance captured under the moonlit night is subtly summed up in 'holding hands'. This really is an emotional moment and I wish you the best in teh vote.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

What a wonderful review - thank you indeed zanya

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Simple, straightforward, and to the point. No need for fancy pictures or long tomes. I like your poem. I like the sentiment in it. It seems as if this were meant for someone special to you (I hope that is the case, and I am not being to nosy). Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Loved this review - wishful thinking !zanya

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

Although this poem is very short, as intended, it says a lot. And, your words allow the reader to feel the JOY. I love it. Straight to the point in blunt terms. Very nice job, my friend.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Loved this review zanya

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very good acrostic spelling joy. Your words were great and your imagery was very good as well. good luck. hugs, teri

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014

Loved this review zanya