Write, Write, Write Your Poem
Best when put to the tune of Row, Row, Row Your Boat8 total reviews
Comment from Green Lake Girl
This is the best of the bad! LOL. I love the spirit of this poem. The simple rhyme, the sing-songy rhythm is just perfect for this contest. Well done..
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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This is the best of the bad! LOL. I love the spirit of this poem. The simple rhyme, the sing-songy rhythm is just perfect for this contest. Well done..
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Just returned to Fanstory after leaving for several years. A much belated thanks for your review.
Comment from Drew Delaney
This is too good to be bad, but too bad to be good. LOL
It is really sweet especially with a young child in the pic who could be mistaken for the writer of the poem. Doubt though that he would know some of the words used here. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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This is too good to be bad, but too bad to be good. LOL
It is really sweet especially with a young child in the pic who could be mistaken for the writer of the poem. Doubt though that he would know some of the words used here. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Just returned to Fanstory after leaving for several years. A much belated thanks for your review.
Comment from sibhus
Ja, thizs will qualify for the contest and you may need that nom de plumber after posting this, but I do feel that it makes an excellent entry and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Ja, thizs will qualify for the contest and you may need that nom de plumber after posting this, but I do feel that it makes an excellent entry and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Just returned to Fanstory after leaving for several years. A much belated thanks for your review.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Merrily, merrily, merrily wish the top 10 out that day LOL. Now I cannot get that silly song out of my head. At least you did not pick "That's the way uh huh uh huh I like it" which would have truly sent me off the deep end of the dock. I'd say nicely done, but that defeats the purpose of the contest so good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Merrily, merrily, merrily wish the top 10 out that day LOL. Now I cannot get that silly song out of my head. At least you did not pick "That's the way uh huh uh huh I like it" which would have truly sent me off the deep end of the dock. I'd say nicely done, but that defeats the purpose of the contest so good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Just returned to Fanstory after leaving for several years. A much belated thanks for your review.
Comment from w.j.debi
Now I will have the tuen of "row, row, row your boat" stuck in my head all day. Excellent job. I like the catchy and smooth rhythm and the rhymes. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Now I will have the tuen of "row, row, row your boat" stuck in my head all day. Excellent job. I like the catchy and smooth rhythm and the rhymes. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Just returned to Fanstory after leaving for several years. A much belated thanks for your review.
Comment from Spitfire
LOL I loved singing this. I guess it would be considered bad because it makes references to FS which limits the audience: rankings, pay your money. A fun read.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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LOL I loved singing this. I guess it would be considered bad because it makes references to FS which limits the audience: rankings, pay your money. A fun read.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Just returned to Fanstory after leaving for several years. A much belated thanks for your review.
Comment from DSMalott
Clever.
Humorous but pointed in its encouragement to write.
The rhyming was good and the structure well paced in the quatrain format.
I enjoyed the lilting cadence and the hint of satire toward the ranking system.
Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Clever.
Humorous but pointed in its encouragement to write.
The rhyming was good and the structure well paced in the quatrain format.
I enjoyed the lilting cadence and the hint of satire toward the ranking system.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Just returned to Fanstory after leaving for several years. A much belated thanks for your review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Perfect picture for your 'bad' poem. I like everything about it. I like the rhyme. I like the take on row row row song. Even a bad poem (and yours is so bad it is good) takes thought to put into words. Good job and good luck in the contest. No changes needed.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Perfect picture for your 'bad' poem. I like everything about it. I like the rhyme. I like the take on row row row song. Even a bad poem (and yours is so bad it is good) takes thought to put into words. Good job and good luck in the contest. No changes needed.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2021
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Just returned to Fanstory after leaving for several years. A much belated thanks for your review.
