Comment from honeytree

Excellent

Excellent words to read

when we write our words down

we all have our own way of expressing

what we write that is a gift from God.

honey tree

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I like the message of your poem. I like the arrangement of the lines. I like the break between the shorter lines with the several longer ones. I see nothing to suggest changes except perhaps a picture if you could find one that does express the mood. However, I know that you may not wish to illustrate your poem. That is ok.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

Comment from Jay Squires

Excellent

You kinda like to read, do ya, Walt? Famous understatement?

Reading and writing go hand in hand. Sometimes they are my own words that allow my soul to go free. Sometimes it might be yours, or any other of a million writers. Words, their combination, perhaps the whole that is much greater than all the words strung together.

We read, we write.

Great job, Walt.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

A good story will live on forver, or I should say as long as there's a human race to read it. Interesting on how you've structured this. It's different. I think, I like it. Very nicely written. Les

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014