Grief
Many emotions as twin towers fell.112 total reviews
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello Poet,
You paint a vivid picture in the mind of the reader with this solid write. Its hard to describe the feelings left over from that fateful day, but your statement of futility and confusion comes through loud and clear. As you say, there are some pains that will never truly heal.
Nice job with this subject, and best wishes for the contest, Bill
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Hello Poet,
You paint a vivid picture in the mind of the reader with this solid write. Its hard to describe the feelings left over from that fateful day, but your statement of futility and confusion comes through loud and clear. As you say, there are some pains that will never truly heal.
Nice job with this subject, and best wishes for the contest, Bill
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thank you for reading.
Comment from kukarad70
Dear Author
Your poem is full with shocking emotions concerning with twin towers burn and fall and jumping of human from windows to save life. The horror of inhumanity act has made the world tumultuous and silence, but terror activities are still not stopped. This is a very bad part and intolerable thing in human life.
Until and unless every human could not get sense after him or her, there are many human beings in this world and they have surviving right, there is not possible to get a better world and this world will be always tearful and fearful.
Very nice emotions writing for the contest and wish to your win.
Thanks and regards.
Kamal
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Dear Author
Your poem is full with shocking emotions concerning with twin towers burn and fall and jumping of human from windows to save life. The horror of inhumanity act has made the world tumultuous and silence, but terror activities are still not stopped. This is a very bad part and intolerable thing in human life.
Until and unless every human could not get sense after him or her, there are many human beings in this world and they have surviving right, there is not possible to get a better world and this world will be always tearful and fearful.
Very nice emotions writing for the contest and wish to your win.
Thanks and regards.
Kamal
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from granny goes viral
Yes. Just "yes". Well, maybe more. If you have been following me at all, you know how this has impacted my life and my poetry. You used many of the images that I have used and have thought regarding this and what has happened in the thirteen years since. The octopus-like tentacles is exactly what I think of ISIS.
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Yes. Just "yes". Well, maybe more. If you have been following me at all, you know how this has impacted my life and my poetry. You used many of the images that I have used and have thought regarding this and what has happened in the thirteen years since. The octopus-like tentacles is exactly what I think of ISIS.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
You could not have picked a better subject for the Emotions poetry contest. The horror of that event you really, brutally start your free verse - with just that one man who jumped from a height of 100 storeys. You led us in with that act then went on to describe the aftermath of the twin towers collapse. A horrific event and you reveal how it affected you. Good work. Warm regards and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
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You could not have picked a better subject for the Emotions poetry contest. The horror of that event you really, brutally start your free verse - with just that one man who jumped from a height of 100 storeys. You led us in with that act then went on to describe the aftermath of the twin towers collapse. A horrific event and you reveal how it affected you. Good work. Warm regards and good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Matoshka
You picture and words express the darkness of that day, the tears, the shock and horror; the lives lost and those left to wonder why and how. I wish you the best in the contest and bless you for your write. Blessings
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You picture and words express the darkness of that day, the tears, the shock and horror; the lives lost and those left to wonder why and how. I wish you the best in the contest and bless you for your write. Blessings
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
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so welcome, Linda. Blessings and hugs
Comment from amahra
Very appropriate and timely poem about one of our nation's worst tragedies. Very colorful and beautiful art work you chose for this poem. The content was accurate and well penned without over-due graphics for emotions.
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Very appropriate and timely poem about one of our nation's worst tragedies. Very colorful and beautiful art work you chose for this poem. The content was accurate and well penned without over-due graphics for emotions.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
A very well managed thought about 9/11. Very well done work with enhancing word imagery about an event that brings grief to the whole world. I love your working around the theme of the contest which is 'grief'.
ola thomas
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A very well managed thought about 9/11. Very well done work with enhancing word imagery about an event that brings grief to the whole world. I love your working around the theme of the contest which is 'grief'.
ola thomas
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from cupa tea
I've never seen a poem like yours before. Interesting way to set it up. Kinda made you feel it...Well done if you ask me. I write poetry to please myself...I think you do the same...
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I've never seen a poem like yours before. Interesting way to set it up. Kinda made you feel it...Well done if you ask me. I write poetry to please myself...I think you do the same...
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Leineco
A wonderful piece for the emotions prompt contest.
Your rendition of the chaos of pain, grief and horror
on that fateful day definitely evokes strong reaction,
especially with the opening horrific vision of a man
plunging to preferred death in the face of the hellish
fiery conflagration he faces.
and the reminder that the scars of that day will never
truly heal.
Strong piece.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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A wonderful piece for the emotions prompt contest.
Your rendition of the chaos of pain, grief and horror
on that fateful day definitely evokes strong reaction,
especially with the opening horrific vision of a man
plunging to preferred death in the face of the hellish
fiery conflagration he faces.
and the reminder that the scars of that day will never
truly heal.
Strong piece.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
Comment from Allieas
You put into words thoughts that haunt me around this time every year. Beautifully written poem and haunting imagery. Best of luck with the contest
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You put into words thoughts that haunt me around this time every year. Beautifully written poem and haunting imagery. Best of luck with the contest
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
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Thanks for reading.
