God's Gift
Tree- Hugger 5-7-5112 total reviews
Comment from pipersfancy
Lovely words paired with a lovely image. Syllable count is correct for this 5-7-5 contest entry. The last line is my favourite! Good luck in this contest,
PF
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Lovely words paired with a lovely image. Syllable count is correct for this 5-7-5 contest entry. The last line is my favourite! Good luck in this contest,
PF
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi Piper, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for the best wishes...
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, there's a lot said in this tiny poem, and it's really impactful - trees do support life, in keeping our air clean and free of pollutants. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Wow, there's a lot said in this tiny poem, and it's really impactful - trees do support life, in keeping our air clean and free of pollutants. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi Dawn, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it....and you re so right...yes they do...thank you for your best wishes
Comment from artisart4u
Your haiku about trees is nice.
You have the right amount of syllables and the last line ties lines and two together.
Good luck with your writing prompt.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Your haiku about trees is nice.
You have the right amount of syllables and the last line ties lines and two together.
Good luck with your writing prompt.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi Artisart, thank you for your wonderful six...and a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it thank you
Comment from sibhus
What a wonderfuland a great message. With these few words you have created a message that should be spread to the ends of the earth, which if followed would save the earth and everything in it. Great poem.
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What a wonderfuland a great message. With these few words you have created a message that should be spread to the ends of the earth, which if followed would save the earth and everything in it. Great poem.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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HI Sibhus, wow!! thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so right...thank you...
Comment from DSMalott
Good syllable count.
The prompt requirements were met with flair! A very good appeal with good visual qualities as well.
Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Good syllable count.
The prompt requirements were met with flair! A very good appeal with good visual qualities as well.
Well done.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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HI DS, thank you so very much...so glad you like it
Comment from kiwisteveh
At first sight, a pretty tribute to those wonders of nature that keep our planet healthy.
On second examination, I found your poem to be a little 'bitsy'. By that I mean that there were too many separate thoughts - a list, rather than items combined to focus on an overall theme. You have:
gift, life-giving, eternal, respect them - all fine in their own way, but, for me, not tied together to make a unified piece.
Steve
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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At first sight, a pretty tribute to those wonders of nature that keep our planet healthy.
On second examination, I found your poem to be a little 'bitsy'. By that I mean that there were too many separate thoughts - a list, rather than items combined to focus on an overall theme. You have:
gift, life-giving, eternal, respect them - all fine in their own way, but, for me, not tied together to make a unified piece.
Steve
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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thanks
Comment from BLACKDYKE
Spot on with this great haiku.
Nature just as it should be told.
Succinct and fully educational.
Nice picture to accompany. Is
it correct to have no capitals?
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Spot on with this great haiku.
Nature just as it should be told.
Succinct and fully educational.
Nice picture to accompany. Is
it correct to have no capitals?
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Yes...thank you so very much...so glad you like it...
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My pleasure
Comment from giovannimariatommaso
Great Haiku poem about trees and their life-giving properties, the basic reason that they should be respected; Life! 5/7/5 format, good luck in contest. No spelling or grammatical errors.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Great Haiku poem about trees and their life-giving properties, the basic reason that they should be respected; Life! 5/7/5 format, good luck in contest. No spelling or grammatical errors.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi Giovanni, thank you so very much..and you are so right...so glad you like it...
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Y/W GMT
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
A good 5/7/5 both in syllable count and content. It is very true 'life giving air' - if trees disappeared then so would we. A well written intelligent 5/7/5. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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A good 5/7/5 both in syllable count and content. It is very true 'life giving air' - if trees disappeared then so would we. A well written intelligent 5/7/5. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi Dorothy...you are so right...they need to stop cutting they down for any reason they can find...thank you so very much...so glad you like it
Comment from tdragonfly
So often people forget that trees are also a gift from God and should be taken care of. Thanks for the reminder. Written in the proper pose.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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So often people forget that trees are also a gift from God and should be taken care of. Thanks for the reminder. Written in the proper pose.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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thank you so much...and yes they do...they are so important to the environment...and you are so welcome...
