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God's Gift

Tree- Hugger 5-7-5

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Comment from mjac777
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Very good 5/7/5, mystery author. You said a lot in 17 short syllables.
I am also a tree "fanatic". They are indeed, magnificent entities.
The last line was inspired - "respect their purpose"
Very well done.
Good luck in the contest.
This is a strong contender.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    thank you for a great review...so glad you like it...
Comment from thee-name
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Trees is a good gift from GOD.
TREES,A GIFT FROM GOD
FILTERING THE AIR, COOLING
RESPECT THEIR PURPOSE

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    yes they truly are...thank you so very much
reply by thee-name on 13-Sep-2014
    THANK YOU!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, everything God creates is for a purpose, and you have explained the tree's purpose as well, I loved to sit in a tree to read as a little girl. as a 50 year old, my tree climbing days are over. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Hi Pam, thank you so very much
Comment from Nosha17
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Trees do have a significant ecological impact on our Earth. Well chosen words to convey your message. I agree, they must be protected at all costs. Good complimentary picture, good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Hi Faye, yes they have to be...we need them...thank you so very much
Comment from Eternal Muse
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That was so beautiful. Excellent use of 5-7-5, great visuals. A tree is certainly a gift from God. It's so small in your picture, but they grow! Years ago, I got my mother a tiny tree for mother's day. Couldn't have been more than 12 inches long. Now it's a huge blue spruce - my mother has been gone for years, but her tree lives.

A beautiful poem, well deserving of a win.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    HI Yeltel, what a wonderful story about the tree...and so sorry for the loss of your mother....thank you so very much
Comment from joann r romei
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This was lovely, I always feel closer to the spirit in nature, one can really appreciate the colors, stillness and the beauty of it all.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    HI Joann, we just to stop cutting down so many of our forest to make parking lots...thank you so much
Comment from livelylinda
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Author: excellent 5/7/5 and a good contender in the contest. Yes, we must not forget their purpose in our lives but also enjoy the beauty. livelylinda

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Hi Linda, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...
Comment from chasennov
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Tree- Hugger 5-7-5 'Gods Gift.' This is an excellent Haiku 5-7-5 you have created here. I liked the formulation, and the structure was just as well done.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Hi Chase, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it
reply by chasennov on 13-Sep-2014
    You are most welcome.
Comment from Allieas
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Short, simple, sweet and beautiful. And true. This should be put up for all to see. Maybe people would give more than a thought to protecting our planet! Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    HI Alexandra, I wish they would...thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it
Comment from Oatmeal
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The theme is wonderful. The descriptive words are well chosen. The line count is correct. The artwork complemented your poem.

There were no errors. No SPAG.

Wonderful job you did with your entry.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
    Hi Oatmeal, thank you so very much....I am so glad you like it...