God's Gift
Tree- Hugger 5-7-5112 total reviews
Comment from RGstar
Absolutely.
Love this.
A simple message, clear and concise, whatever way you look at it.
Do not kill for the sake of killing or leisure.
Good write, good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Absolutely.
Love this.
A simple message, clear and concise, whatever way you look at it.
Do not kill for the sake of killing or leisure.
Good write, good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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HI Roy, this is what I am trying to say...don't kill them to give me flyers in my mail...would rather not have them...thank you so very much....
Comment from sunnilicious
I like your artwork selection. That's such a great message... You tree hugger you. I think the second line is 6-syllables... maybe double check the syllable counts with a dictionary. Good work. GOod luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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I like your artwork selection. That's such a great message... You tree hugger you. I think the second line is 6-syllables... maybe double check the syllable counts with a dictionary. Good work. GOod luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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HI Sunnilicious, I will thank you...and thank you for the help
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filtering 3, the 1, air 1, cooling 2....
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It came out great! Have a great weekend!
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you have one too!!! thank you...
Comment from mauial
Your second line filt/er/ing our air has only two syllables and not the required seven for the prompt. Suggest you edit it before the deadline. Let me know when you do and I will change rating.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Your second line filt/er/ing our air has only two syllables and not the required seven for the prompt. Suggest you edit it before the deadline. Let me know when you do and I will change rating.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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HI Mauial, long day yesterday...late night...sorry!!! not like me....I did correct it...thank you for the help...Luff Linda xxoo
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I revised rating
Comment from Acquired Taste
Beautiful...from my earliest recollections I have loved Joyce Kilmer's poem Trees.
I think your 5-7-5 is lovely and for so few words, filled with absolute truth. AT=/
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Beautiful...from my earliest recollections I have loved Joyce Kilmer's poem Trees.
I think your 5-7-5 is lovely and for so few words, filled with absolute truth. AT=/
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi AT, thank you so very much...we truly do need to value our trees...
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you posted to go with your poem
It looks so pure and clean
It is a perfect match for your write
if humans could respect God they would respect a trees purpose.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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I love the artwork you posted to go with your poem
It looks so pure and clean
It is a perfect match for your write
if humans could respect God they would respect a trees purpose.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi Misscookie, thank you so very much....I am so glad you like it...we truly need them
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Amen... You're very welcome.Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from Eric1
This has got to be the best entry for this particular contest that I have reviewed to date my friend, your wonderful words say it all, respect their purpose, beautiful words.
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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This has got to be the best entry for this particular contest that I have reviewed to date my friend, your wonderful words say it all, respect their purpose, beautiful words.
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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HI Eric, thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like this one...we need the start protecting our trees...they are a big part of our lives..our world thank you
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You are so welcome my friend.
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smiling
Comment from lynglyng
Very cleverly written. The message was very clear and a true and positive message at that. The picture you chose was perfect adding just the right touch to the theme of the poem.
Great job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Very cleverly written. The message was very clear and a true and positive message at that. The picture you chose was perfect adding just the right touch to the theme of the poem.
Great job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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thank you so very much
Comment from LIJ Red
Why doesn't the middle line say "filtering and cooling air"
to make this a true 5/7/5 and not a 5/5/5? Or maybe
"oxygenating our air"? which is more correct. You may not meet the prompt as is... I'll regrade if you change...
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Why doesn't the middle line say "filtering and cooling air"
to make this a true 5/7/5 and not a 5/5/5? Or maybe
"oxygenating our air"? which is more correct. You may not meet the prompt as is... I'll regrade if you change...
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi LIJ, sorry long day yesterday...late night...I did fix it...like your words..will go check it out...thank you so much for the help...and a great review....Luff Linda xxoo
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Hi LIJ, thank you so very much...
Comment from Jackarrie
A great illustration for your 5-7-5 poem about trees
trees, a gift from God
filtering our air
respect their purpose
Well done, good luck in the contest. Mary
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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A great illustration for your 5-7-5 poem about trees
trees, a gift from God
filtering our air
respect their purpose
Well done, good luck in the contest. Mary
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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HI Mary, thank you so much...
Comment from adewpearl
God's Gift - add apostrophe for possessive
fil/ter/ing/our/air - this second line only has 5 syllables instead of the required 7
I like the message you convey about the important function of trees and about their spiritual nature
the 4 is due to wrong syllable count for this contest
Brooke
rating raised for good revision
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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God's Gift - add apostrophe for possessive
fil/ter/ing/our/air - this second line only has 5 syllables instead of the required 7
I like the message you convey about the important function of trees and about their spiritual nature
the 4 is due to wrong syllable count for this contest
Brooke
rating raised for good revision
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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HI Brooke, sorry sweets, long day yesterday...late night...as always thank you for the help...will catch the apostrophe...corrected to other...I never do that...don't know what I was thinking...long day at the hospital...couldn't sleep...but I was dead tired...always thank you for your help teacher...and a great review...Love ya Linda xxoo
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No need to apologize - I read the revision and raised the rating - I'm sorry you're going through this crisis
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it is ok...just another day...and this to shall pass...thank you so much...
