Love
my fiance2 total reviews
Comment from Cajungirl
Your syllable count is off. Please check lines two and three. Please also note that your font color choice is very hard to read.
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Your syllable count is off. Please check lines two and three. Please also note that your font color choice is very hard to read.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
Comment from c_lucas
my fiance
"Love" by diva1006
You look so sexy
In the bed, your blue eyes watching
Me slowly undressing
17 syllable, not 19.
Not enough contrast, had to highlight to read.
This 5-7-5 needs editing.
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my fiance
"Love" by diva1006
You look so sexy
In the bed, your blue eyes watching
Me slowly undressing
17 syllable, not 19.
Not enough contrast, had to highlight to read.
This 5-7-5 needs editing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
