When God Created Color
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/8/6164 total reviews
Comment from bard owl
Another tribute to nature and the endless variety of colors found around us. God must have known how mankind so appreciates the hues our eyes are capable of seeing. Your poem has a very upbeat tone with perfect rhythm and rhyme. A pleasure to read this one, Brooke. Blessings, Linda
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Another tribute to nature and the endless variety of colors found around us. God must have known how mankind so appreciates the hues our eyes are capable of seeing. Your poem has a very upbeat tone with perfect rhythm and rhyme. A pleasure to read this one, Brooke. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Linda :-) Brooke
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! He visits my lawn too often, but we gave up on killing the little "suns" and are learning to love them, thanks to your brainwashing.
Lovely idea, and very original. I can just see Him brushing the red and gold dawn across the sky, pulling up the sun. What a gorgeous time of day. :)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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LOL! He visits my lawn too often, but we gave up on killing the little "suns" and are learning to love them, thanks to your brainwashing.
Lovely idea, and very original. I can just see Him brushing the red and gold dawn across the sky, pulling up the sun. What a gorgeous time of day. :)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Phyllis, thank you for the laugh and the review, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hi. Our the cosmos rainbow , the wee lady bird , and the robin and the vlue egg and ble ble skies and the picnk of a little child's face eating ice cream on a hot day and...
every since reading your poem i am coming up with colour s and the joy that goes with them. padumachitta
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Hi. Our the cosmos rainbow , the wee lady bird , and the robin and the vlue egg and ble ble skies and the picnk of a little child's face eating ice cream on a hot day and...
every since reading your poem i am coming up with colour s and the joy that goes with them. padumachitta
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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padumachitta, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from INtity
This is a nice write. But one thing I do know for sure-- he visited my lawn ... love those lines your aspect of color on earth is refreshing.
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This is a nice write. But one thing I do know for sure-- he visited my lawn ... love those lines your aspect of color on earth is refreshing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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INtity, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rrabinow
I like the line He painted the dawn, great use of description in your poem that created the image in my mind. I like that your poem is thought provoking. Great rhyme scheme used. Wonderfully written poem.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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I like the line He painted the dawn, great use of description in your poem that created the image in my mind. I like that your poem is thought provoking. Great rhyme scheme used. Wonderfully written poem.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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rrabinow, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from thee-name
Good verse. Smooth to read and enjoyable.
WHEN GOD CREATED COLOR
I BET HE HAD IN MIND
THE LOVELY LITTLE LADYBUG
WITH POLKA DOT BEHIND
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Good verse. Smooth to read and enjoyable.
WHEN GOD CREATED COLOR
I BET HE HAD IN MIND
THE LOVELY LITTLE LADYBUG
WITH POLKA DOT BEHIND
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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thee-name, thank you for your review :-) Brooke
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THANK YOU!
Comment from Just2Write
Another delightful poem that's sure to please children of all ages. I love ladybugs, and had one on my finger just a week or so back. It's looked like a twin of the one in your photo. Yesterday, I saw a powder blue bug on my garden wall, but couldn't catch it. A lovely colour though - just like your poem tells us, God created some wonderful colours for His creations.
I always delight in your children's Discovery Poems, Brooke. They make us look at our world with fresh new eyes.
Rose.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Another delightful poem that's sure to please children of all ages. I love ladybugs, and had one on my finger just a week or so back. It's looked like a twin of the one in your photo. Yesterday, I saw a powder blue bug on my garden wall, but couldn't catch it. A lovely colour though - just like your poem tells us, God created some wonderful colours for His creations.
I always delight in your children's Discovery Poems, Brooke. They make us look at our world with fresh new eyes.
Rose.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Rose, thank you so very much :-) I so appreciate your generous stars :-) Brooke
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Sigh - my last six of the week - I knew I was saving it for something special.
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:-)
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, Brooke, it was so great! The lady bug in your picture attracted my attention (I love them!), and the poem was just adorable. Excellent rhymes and flow. Fantastic visuals throughout. I can see color from your words and they paint fine scenes.
When God created color,
I bet He had in mind
the lovely little lady bug
with polka dot behind.
Excellent closure in the last couplet about God visiting your lawn. Very creative and ingenuous. Excellent for kids 3 to 80 (smile).
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Oh, Brooke, it was so great! The lady bug in your picture attracted my attention (I love them!), and the poem was just adorable. Excellent rhymes and flow. Fantastic visuals throughout. I can see color from your words and they paint fine scenes.
When God created color,
I bet He had in mind
the lovely little lady bug
with polka dot behind.
Excellent closure in the last couplet about God visiting your lawn. Very creative and ingenuous. Excellent for kids 3 to 80 (smile).
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much, Yelena. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this and appreciate your generous sixth star, a special treat this late in the rating week :-) Brooke
Comment from Nosha17
Somebody who reviewed my poem on the Lakes said she had been to the Lakes and had called Britain the wet island. I said, true, but where else would you get such brilliant green vegetation from? I loved all the colourful descriptions you gave us in your poem, they truly are a wonder of Nature. Lovely flowing rhymes, super pic and most enjoyable. Faye
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Somebody who reviewed my poem on the Lakes said she had been to the Lakes and had called Britain the wet island. I said, true, but where else would you get such brilliant green vegetation from? I loved all the colourful descriptions you gave us in your poem, they truly are a wonder of Nature. Lovely flowing rhymes, super pic and most enjoyable. Faye
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Faye, thank you so much :-) You're right -it's always a matter of perspective. I LOVE dandelions. I have a yuppie nephew who pays men with trucks and chemicals to kill his. Brooke
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
Awesome poem.There is something about polka dots that appeal to me always! The last stanza was my favorite.
When God first drew in color,
I bet He painted dawn,
but one thing I do know for sure --
He visited my lawn.
Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Awesome poem.There is something about polka dots that appeal to me always! The last stanza was my favorite.
When God first drew in color,
I bet He painted dawn,
but one thing I do know for sure --
He visited my lawn.
Well done!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Chigysiski, thanks so much :-) Brooke
