When God Created Color
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/8/6164 total reviews
Comment from stroncoso1
You show a lot of imagination and weave it so well in your poetry. This is another creative example of well written verses that tell a story of wonder. You definitely have a way with words and rhyme them so well and succinctly.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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You show a lot of imagination and weave it so well in your poetry. This is another creative example of well written verses that tell a story of wonder. You definitely have a way with words and rhyme them so well and succinctly.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, stroncoso, for your thoughtful response to my poem :-) Brooke
Comment from zanya
A moment of musing on the sheer joy of the presence of color in our lives and on our doorstep - colors we frequently shut out in our daily grind
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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A moment of musing on the sheer joy of the presence of color in our lives and on our doorstep - colors we frequently shut out in our daily grind
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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zanya, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Donya Quijote
Love lady bugs!!!
In a short little poem, you have captured all the those mundane, insignificant little things that so often go unnoticed and underappreciated in the rush of life.
A happy toned poem that makes the reader want to around for all those beautiful things you mentioned. Made me smile to read. Fantastic imagery. Nice pacing, pauses give one an opportunity to take in the sights, so to speak. Just for a moment, I watched your ladybug walk across a leaf and saw the sun share its shine with a lonely dandelion.
Another fine, fine fun poem...
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Love lady bugs!!!
In a short little poem, you have captured all the those mundane, insignificant little things that so often go unnoticed and underappreciated in the rush of life.
A happy toned poem that makes the reader want to around for all those beautiful things you mentioned. Made me smile to read. Fantastic imagery. Nice pacing, pauses give one an opportunity to take in the sights, so to speak. Just for a moment, I watched your ladybug walk across a leaf and saw the sun share its shine with a lonely dandelion.
Another fine, fine fun poem...
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Donya, thank you so very much, my encouraging and generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh, this one is delightful, Brooke. Some of us at times, fail to see the beautiful colours in our neighbourhood, around us all the time wherever we go, but especially in nature. I loved this one, Giddy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Oh, this one is delightful, Brooke. Some of us at times, fail to see the beautiful colours in our neighbourhood, around us all the time wherever we go, but especially in nature. I loved this one, Giddy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Giddy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Linda England Bonam
What a fantastic poem, Brooke! I seriously don't know how you can consistently come up with something to write about every day and always have it perfect!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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What a fantastic poem, Brooke! I seriously don't know how you can consistently come up with something to write about every day and always have it perfect!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
Great genre.i adore rainbows so this meant so much.
Little gems and miracles.Great visual.
Well written and makes sense.
Reads well and flows well.
Many will relate and enjoy.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Great genre.i adore rainbows so this meant so much.
Little gems and miracles.Great visual.
Well written and makes sense.
Reads well and flows well.
Many will relate and enjoy.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Maddie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hi Brooke,
"...that lovely little lady bug with polka dot behind"...that was sweet! As a miner, I've always loved the color of gold, lol, although I don't have "gold fever" anymore. As with the miners of old, I generally sell what I find, but I loved the idea that it grows in your front yard, also, lol...very original thought.
This is a wonderful write about one of my favorite colors, well done.
All my best, Bill
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Hi Brooke,
"...that lovely little lady bug with polka dot behind"...that was sweet! As a miner, I've always loved the color of gold, lol, although I don't have "gold fever" anymore. As with the miners of old, I generally sell what I find, but I loved the idea that it grows in your front yard, also, lol...very original thought.
This is a wonderful write about one of my favorite colors, well done.
All my best, Bill
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, Bill - I bet you have lots of fascinating stories to share :-) Brooke
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I could write a book, lol...and maybe someday I shall...thanks, Brooke
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I hope you do - I shall read it :-)
Comment from Tatarka2
This is just lovely, as your poetry always is. As usual, I'm in awe of your ability to create such a lyrically cohesive poem, so evocative, in such defined form.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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This is just lovely, as your poetry always is. As usual, I'm in awe of your ability to create such a lyrically cohesive poem, so evocative, in such defined form.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Jay Squires
Wonderful in rhyme and tempo, warm in content and dang cute with the surprise ending.
Green is a beautiful God-created color, but why am I also picturing a few of those yellow dandelions with wispy parachutes set to fly and not just a few toys from the grands?
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Wonderful in rhyme and tempo, warm in content and dang cute with the surprise ending.
Green is a beautiful God-created color, but why am I also picturing a few of those yellow dandelions with wispy parachutes set to fly and not just a few toys from the grands?
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am pretty sure when God created color he had kindergarteners sand first graders in mind. He had to because they happen to love color and aren't in the least bit interested in coloring things as they should be.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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I am pretty sure when God created color he had kindergarteners sand first graders in mind. He had to because they happen to love color and aren't in the least bit interested in coloring things as they should be.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Barbara, thank you so much, my generous friend :-) Hey, who's to say their purple lawns and pink skies aren't just an improvement on a good thing? ;-) Brooke
