When God Created Color
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/8/6164 total reviews
Comment from tedanytime
Fine children's poem describing things God created with color.
This ladybug is golden, they used to be red...
When God created color,
I bet He had in mind
the lovely little lady bug
with polka dot behind.
Nice rhymes.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Fine children's poem describing things God created with color.
This ladybug is golden, they used to be red...
When God created color,
I bet He had in mind
the lovely little lady bug
with polka dot behind.
Nice rhymes.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Ted, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Love this! I often wonder at the imagination of God, how did He come up with so many beautiful, amazing things. Well He's God of course.
Really enjoyed this one as I do all of them. Rox =}
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Love this! I often wonder at the imagination of God, how did He come up with so many beautiful, amazing things. Well He's God of course.
Really enjoyed this one as I do all of them. Rox =}
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Rox, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lynglyng
Another great poem. I guess this is why you are no.1. I enjoy every poem you write. I love the way your poems flow and tell a story in a fun way that makes me feel happy. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Another great poem. I guess this is why you are no.1. I enjoy every poem you write. I love the way your poems flow and tell a story in a fun way that makes me feel happy. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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lynglyng, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Loren (7)
You must have a very, very lovely lawn and or garden. The little details, the tiny, are brightly visual and I was nodding my way through the poem the entire time. Loren
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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You must have a very, very lovely lawn and or garden. The little details, the tiny, are brightly visual and I was nodding my way through the poem the entire time. Loren
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2014
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Loren, thank you so much. I live in an apartment, but I have vivid memories of the lawn in my childhood home :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
I enjoy their visit in my veg garden. The control the aphids on leaf vegetables. Well done Brooke. Pokadot behind. Right on. Blessings to you and the bunch.
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I enjoy their visit in my veg garden. The control the aphids on leaf vegetables. Well done Brooke. Pokadot behind. Right on. Blessings to you and the bunch.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
Comment from RYME4U
Oh how great! I love this colorful poem. The items you name are a joy to see. Wouldn't it be sad if we were all in a black and white world? Great job!
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Oh how great! I love this colorful poem. The items you name are a joy to see. Wouldn't it be sad if we were all in a black and white world? Great job!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
Comment from LIJ Red
I wondered if that last line was "satorial". Not exactly a punchline or comprehension clue. Spellcheck turned my question to sartorial-to do with clothes. So much for big words. Neat. Five.
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I wondered if that last line was "satorial". Not exactly a punchline or comprehension clue. Spellcheck turned my question to sartorial-to do with clothes. So much for big words. Neat. Five.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
Comment from Eric1
Hi Brooke, this latest poem is great, A wonderful creation about the way God created this wonderful earth, great rhyming and rhythm and a wonderful, wonderful flow.
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Hi Brooke, this latest poem is great, A wonderful creation about the way God created this wonderful earth, great rhyming and rhythm and a wonderful, wonderful flow.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
Comment from emrpoems
how soon can we expect to see your book of children's poems?
Solid abcb rhymes as usual
Excellent alliteration and perfect enjambment.
God created every colour combination you could imagine and this is very obvious when we look at all the different specie of animal
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how soon can we expect to see your book of children's poems?
Solid abcb rhymes as usual
Excellent alliteration and perfect enjambment.
God created every colour combination you could imagine and this is very obvious when we look at all the different specie of animal
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
Comment from madhatter1977
Another excellent rhyme - I love the natural imagery and the photo is spot on! I like the simplicity of the message and the language used to convey the colourful world we live in. Excellent poem, Brooke! Best wishes, Pete :)
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Another excellent rhyme - I love the natural imagery and the photo is spot on! I like the simplicity of the message and the language used to convey the colourful world we live in. Excellent poem, Brooke! Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
