When God Created Color
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/8/6164 total reviews
Comment from Delahay
This is a fun poem that could be for children or adults. Many of your poems for children have the themes of how things were created so this one about colors fits right in. But it is also entertaining for adults as well.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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This is a fun poem that could be for children or adults. Many of your poems for children have the themes of how things were created so this one about colors fits right in. But it is also entertaining for adults as well.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you, WardHays, for your thoughtful insights :-) Brooke
Comment from Smoothiecool
great choice of well penned words to allow your reader to see and feel the colours God painted in
good visual to portray this
good enjambment through verses to allow flow
good rhyme theme through out
love the last line to finish
cheers smoothiecool
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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great choice of well penned words to allow your reader to see and feel the colours God painted in
good visual to portray this
good enjambment through verses to allow flow
good rhyme theme through out
love the last line to finish
cheers smoothiecool
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Faye, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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most welcome..SC >.Faye
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Another glowing example of a talented poet.
I love your creative approach and ability to find just the right words to weave together to amaze,not just the children, but all who read your words.
An eye-catching, complementary and colourful presentation.
Still no sixes-Sorry!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Another glowing example of a talented poet.
I love your creative approach and ability to find just the right words to weave together to amaze,not just the children, but all who read your words.
An eye-catching, complementary and colourful presentation.
Still no sixes-Sorry!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Seken :-) Brooke
Comment from expressions9
Haha! Hi Brooke - that's such a sweet children's poem and so perfectly crafted (I think I'll read it to my grandsons!). The rhythm and size of the poem is just right for children and the presentation is beautiful! God's creation is truly awesome :)
Thanks for sharing
God bless, Christine :)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Haha! Hi Brooke - that's such a sweet children's poem and so perfectly crafted (I think I'll read it to my grandsons!). The rhythm and size of the poem is just right for children and the presentation is beautiful! God's creation is truly awesome :)
Thanks for sharing
God bless, Christine :)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you so very much, Christine, for your generous and thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from RGstar
A nice little delivery with a humorous twist at the end brigs forth smiles.
Good alliteration throughout.
All in all, a petite little write; bouncy and cute.
Best wishes,
RGstar
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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A nice little delivery with a humorous twist at the end brigs forth smiles.
Good alliteration throughout.
All in all, a petite little write; bouncy and cute.
Best wishes,
RGstar
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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RG, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from krys123
Brooke,
Absolutely impressively marvelous and so very well written it should win a popularity contest with poets everywhere.
Your whining helped with your rhythmic flow so well as your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your writing.
The imagery almost was in Technicolor and very demonstratively descriptive and exquisitely expressive throughout: "Or maybe it was sunshine with bursts of glowing gold or dandelions, just as bright, but easier to hold." In a stew reader feel is he could touch the dandelions and visualize the sun rays.
Thank you so much my friend for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the good Lord be with you always Brooke.
Alex
PS: Excellent alliteration in your third line of your poem.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Brooke,
Absolutely impressively marvelous and so very well written it should win a popularity contest with poets everywhere.
Your whining helped with your rhythmic flow so well as your rhythm flowed smoothly throughout your writing.
The imagery almost was in Technicolor and very demonstratively descriptive and exquisitely expressive throughout: "Or maybe it was sunshine with bursts of glowing gold or dandelions, just as bright, but easier to hold." In a stew reader feel is he could touch the dandelions and visualize the sun rays.
Thank you so much my friend for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the good Lord be with you always Brooke.
Alex
PS: Excellent alliteration in your third line of your poem.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Alex, thank you so much, my friend :-) I appreciate your thoughtful comments and generous sixth star. Brooke
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You are so sincerely welcome Brooke and it is my pleasure.
Alex
Comment from seaglass
This is a very nice poem with even rhyme. We take color for granted but it adds so much to our lives. He may need to do more lawn painting in California. The need to save water is causing all of them to turn brown.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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This is a very nice poem with even rhyme. We take color for granted but it adds so much to our lives. He may need to do more lawn painting in California. The need to save water is causing all of them to turn brown.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Seaglass, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from James Dooney
Once again Brooke you have given us a great little write up here. I love the imagery and the rhyme structure you give us here ! great work !
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Once again Brooke you have given us a great little write up here. I love the imagery and the rhyme structure you give us here ! great work !
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, James :-) Brooke
Comment from Dom G Robles
This poem is beautiful, as well. Brooke, You have a lot of reserved wealth of wisdom that you can pluck anytime you want. Like a computer, it pops up the ideas you want. Though tired and stumbles a little, the computer hesitates for a while and then works again. Thanks for sharing. Dom
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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This poem is beautiful, as well. Brooke, You have a lot of reserved wealth of wisdom that you can pluck anytime you want. Like a computer, it pops up the ideas you want. Though tired and stumbles a little, the computer hesitates for a while and then works again. Thanks for sharing. Dom
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Dom, for your gracious and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
Now that we moved into spring, I see nature exploding into a variety of colours, and it is so beautiful. I love it. This is another well crafted poem.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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Now that we moved into spring, I see nature exploding into a variety of colours, and it is so beautiful. I love it. This is another well crafted poem.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2014
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CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
