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A Harry Potter fanfiction!
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Comment from
susand3022
I feel so bad for Regulus at this point... he was sorted into the wrong house... but perhaps it was fate, as if it hadn't happened, Harry wouldn't have had that last Horcrux...
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
I completely agree... I feel like he would have had a totally different fate if he'd been in another house, but you're right - maybe Harry wouldn't have defeated Voldemort (or would have had a harder time) if it weren't for Regulus! I think she kind of showed how Regulus could have had a better outcome in Draco, because he was going down that same road for a while!
Comment from
Gargantuan2
Interesting character development. You seem to have a knack for building scenes from interpreted character flaws seen from the books. I like the plot so far and did not see anything to edit in this portion. I look forward to the next one. :)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2014
Thank you! I'm so happy you are enjoying this! =)
Comment from
José Ángel
Excellent chapter, I really liked the story and how you wear one becomes more familiar with it. Congratulations for your work. A hug from Chile, Greetings
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
Thank you for reading and your kind comment! =)
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