Hordes of Angels
We remember 9/11 across the world.26 total reviews
Comment from Cajungirl
What a horrific day in history. So many around the world felt the pain of this day. Bless you for sharing your thoughts in a great poem.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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What a horrific day in history. So many around the world felt the pain of this day. Bless you for sharing your thoughts in a great poem.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much for reading, we remember them today and always. Blessings, K.
Comment from mumsyone
Religious fanatics seek to prove
Always they ride the tide of war.
And you and I know that it isn't going to cease. There's only one answer, and God has it. I'm thankful that He is in control.
Great poem and tribute to those lost on 9-11.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Religious fanatics seek to prove
Always they ride the tide of war.
And you and I know that it isn't going to cease. There's only one answer, and God has it. I'm thankful that He is in control.
Great poem and tribute to those lost on 9-11.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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We wait in joyful hope for the coming of the Spirit. Thanks mum. Blessings, K.
Comment from Keith Argyle
I thought this a potent poem and reminds us all of 9-11. I actually saw the second plane hit the tower as it happened on TV. I felt my stomach drop out at the horror. This poem explains it from an heavenly observation which I though a different way of seeing the horrid event. It flows well and is very visual. I really wonder what the angels and Jesus really thought. Well done. Keith.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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I thought this a potent poem and reminds us all of 9-11. I actually saw the second plane hit the tower as it happened on TV. I felt my stomach drop out at the horror. This poem explains it from an heavenly observation which I though a different way of seeing the horrid event. It flows well and is very visual. I really wonder what the angels and Jesus really thought. Well done. Keith.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you Keith, we all need to remember them today and be on our guard always. Blessings, K.
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You are very welcome my friend. All the best for future works. Keith. Check me out on Facebook and Amazon Kindle.
Comment from adewpearl
solid use of abab rhyming
good assonance in waited that day and in hate reigns and ride the tide
good alliteration in watching, wept
strong verb choices
good use of questions to intensify emotion and engage the reader
a most thoughtful remembrance of this tragic day and its underlying causes
Brooke
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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solid use of abab rhyming
good assonance in waited that day and in hate reigns and ride the tide
good alliteration in watching, wept
strong verb choices
good use of questions to intensify emotion and engage the reader
a most thoughtful remembrance of this tragic day and its underlying causes
Brooke
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Brooke, Thank you for reading; had to write this for today. We lost 2,000 of our people that day. Why does this rating not count towards story rating or author rank? Bless you, K. XX
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That little notice appears with every tenth five star review of anything you write. I have no idea why that is one of the ways Tom makes his calculations.
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Some mother's do have 'em. :-D mustn't give too many stars, might take off and go flying! LOL.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is beautiful, aussie, and I cannot help but give you a six for this, great imagery presented in the words, plus the words are so truthful. I enjoyed reading it.
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this is beautiful, aussie, and I cannot help but give you a six for this, great imagery presented in the words, plus the words are so truthful. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Thank you my friend - we will remember them. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Eigle Rull
Aussie, I wish I had a six star left - you'd get it, my friend. This well written poem is beautiful and professional. It flowed so smoothly and it said so much. It's to bad that people cannot get along. It's to bad that people today just want to kill everyone for no reason. It sickens me. Love you my friend,
Always with respect,
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Aussie, I wish I had a six star left - you'd get it, my friend. This well written poem is beautiful and professional. It flowed so smoothly and it said so much. It's to bad that people cannot get along. It's to bad that people today just want to kill everyone for no reason. It sickens me. Love you my friend,
Always with respect,
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Comment Written 11-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2014
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Love you too and thanks for reading. :-) Kay XX
