The Tell-Tale Bard
Here I'm trapped, and here I'll remain...107 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A perfect poem from such a skilled poet. This is quite a tale and very well written in old-style English. I don't know who my muse is, but there are times I would like her to take a break and let me sleep. Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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A perfect poem from such a skilled poet. This is quite a tale and very well written in old-style English. I don't know who my muse is, but there are times I would like her to take a break and let me sleep. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Aw, you're so kind. I sincerely appreciate the six stars and very thoughtful review. Thanks so much!
Comment from Jean Lutz
Indeed Poe could be your muse. If so you both do well in rendering this one. I loved Poe in high school and once had a pet crow named Smoky.
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Indeed Poe could be your muse. If so you both do well in rendering this one. I loved Poe in high school and once had a pet crow named Smoky.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thanks. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the review sincerely. :]
Comment from dragonpoet
It does seem like he could be a muse of yours. But I think different poems have different muses. This is a well written ode to Poe with death in it also a lot of reverences to the poem 'The Raven'.
It would have had a good chnace in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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It does seem like he could be a muse of yours. But I think different poems have different muses. This is a well written ode to Poe with death in it also a lot of reverences to the poem 'The Raven'.
It would have had a good chnace in the contest.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thanks. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the review sincerely. :]
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You're welcome, Dean.
Joan
Comment from LoannaLois
Heh -heh -heh...I did so enjoy your poem,kind sir. This is so well-written, that Sir Edgar would be proud!(Sir Edgar probably would claim it as his own, pray- tell!).
An aside...my cousin owned a crow years ago, that played "The Raven "to the max. He would say over and over," Nevermore,nevermore,midnight; dreary,dreary". That crow was so smart! You need one, heh,heh,heh.
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Heh -heh -heh...I did so enjoy your poem,kind sir. This is so well-written, that Sir Edgar would be proud!(Sir Edgar probably would claim it as his own, pray- tell!).
An aside...my cousin owned a crow years ago, that played "The Raven "to the max. He would say over and over," Nevermore,nevermore,midnight; dreary,dreary". That crow was so smart! You need one, heh,heh,heh.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Aw, you're so kind. I sincerely appreciate the six stars and very thoughtful review. Thanks so much!
Comment from Auroraboreal800
THANKS Dean for such an amazing piece! I enjoyed each specific word in this very well written poem. I'm sure Edgar Allen Poe would love it. Music was fantastic!
Congratulation POET!
Aurora
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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THANKS Dean for such an amazing piece! I enjoyed each specific word in this very well written poem. I'm sure Edgar Allen Poe would love it. Music was fantastic!
Congratulation POET!
Aurora
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Aw, you're so kind. I sincerely appreciate the six stars and very thoughtful review. Thanks so much!
Comment from GE Parson
Hi there my good Friend, Dean,
What a super imagination you have!I LOVED the poem. I was greatly impressed with the Poe expression or I should say
style.
Keep up the good work.
Your Friend to the end,
Jerry
PS. One of our mutual FS friends graciously made it possible for me to continue on FS, so I am back for two more years.
PS So what was the outcome of your heart visit? Having had triple heart b pass, I am very knowedgable of what you are experiencing.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Hi there my good Friend, Dean,
What a super imagination you have!I LOVED the poem. I was greatly impressed with the Poe expression or I should say
style.
Keep up the good work.
Your Friend to the end,
Jerry
PS. One of our mutual FS friends graciously made it possible for me to continue on FS, so I am back for two more years.
PS So what was the outcome of your heart visit? Having had triple heart b pass, I am very knowedgable of what you are experiencing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Aw, you're so kind, Jerry. I sincerely appreciate the six stars and very thoughtful review. Thanks so much, my friend! :}
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Dean - Pity you missed the mono poetry contest. Very well done. Poor crows get such a bad press, oh and ravens! Poe has a lot to answer for. The line that made me laugh, so out of keeping with the rest of the poem is 'trapped as I am in this dingy bungalow'. Very good - enjoyed the read. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Hi Dean - Pity you missed the mono poetry contest. Very well done. Poor crows get such a bad press, oh and ravens! Poe has a lot to answer for. The line that made me laugh, so out of keeping with the rest of the poem is 'trapped as I am in this dingy bungalow'. Very good - enjoyed the read. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thanks. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the review sincerely. :]
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is a fantastic poem from the author. This reminds me of the Raven and as such it is a great tribute to Edgar Allen Poe. Well done yet again.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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This is a fantastic poem from the author. This reminds me of the Raven and as such it is a great tribute to Edgar Allen Poe. Well done yet again.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thanks. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the review sincerely. :]
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I did enjoy it.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Dean, without a doubt, one of the best poems I have reviewed in a long time, the rhyming is excellent and to have every line ending in the same sound is incredible, not only that, the rhythm and flow are exceptional, of course a Po over here is a guzzunder (the pot to pee in under the bed), A beautifully written poem my friend, though I don't for one minute think you live in a 'dingy' bungalow, have a great day.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Hi Dean, without a doubt, one of the best poems I have reviewed in a long time, the rhyming is excellent and to have every line ending in the same sound is incredible, not only that, the rhythm and flow are exceptional, of course a Po over here is a guzzunder (the pot to pee in under the bed), A beautifully written poem my friend, though I don't for one minute think you live in a 'dingy' bungalow, have a great day.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Aw, you're so kind, Eric. I sincerely appreciate the six stars and very thoughtful review. Thanks so much!
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You are so welcome my friend andI meant every word!
Comment from CHIGYSISKI
Sorry youu missed the deadline.It was very well-written and wouldhavee made an excellent entry.The rhyming scheme is exceptional. the imagery great. My favorite stanza was this:
By now, you may have guessed my fate, even so --
'tis here my shackled soul wavers to and fro,
trapped as I am, in this dingy bungalow,
a bard snared by ghosts of Edgar Allen Poe...
Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Sorry youu missed the deadline.It was very well-written and wouldhavee made an excellent entry.The rhyming scheme is exceptional. the imagery great. My favorite stanza was this:
By now, you may have guessed my fate, even so --
'tis here my shackled soul wavers to and fro,
trapped as I am, in this dingy bungalow,
a bard snared by ghosts of Edgar Allen Poe...
Well done!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2014
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Thanks. I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading it. I appreciate the review sincerely. :]
