There's Something Under My Bed!
Horror Haiku41 total reviews
Comment from nordicgirl
This is by far the best usage of available resources. The words tell a complete story and rge pictures enhance perfectly. NG
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This is by far the best usage of available resources. The words tell a complete story and rge pictures enhance perfectly. NG
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from victor 66
This is smooth and flows easily. I like that it doesn't have some "hidden message' that I'm not sure I'll get. This has very nice imagery and the illustration doesn't hurt either. Good luck in the contest.
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This is smooth and flows easily. I like that it doesn't have some "hidden message' that I'm not sure I'll get. This has very nice imagery and the illustration doesn't hurt either. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from rrabinow
Wonderful use of descriptive words used in your poem. Wonderfully written haiku that you wrote for this prompt. I like that the lines are in color. Best of luck.
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Wonderful use of descriptive words used in your poem. Wonderfully written haiku that you wrote for this prompt. I like that the lines are in color. Best of luck.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from lancellot
This is a horrific 5-7-5 poem. I think Dean, messed up a bit with the Haiku stuff, but he said no rules also. Anyway, this is good stuff.
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This is a horrific 5-7-5 poem. I think Dean, messed up a bit with the Haiku stuff, but he said no rules also. Anyway, this is good stuff.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
Artwork aside, this is a most worthy contest contribution and quite chilling in the delivery. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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Artwork aside, this is a most worthy contest contribution and quite chilling in the delivery. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Yikes this is horrific...shredded..what a horrible way to go.....these haikus are haik -ews......there's something under my bed too but boring me it's just a dust bunny and an old shoe.
Well penned...in red
God bless
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Yikes this is horrific...shredded..what a horrible way to go.....these haikus are haik -ews......there's something under my bed too but boring me it's just a dust bunny and an old shoe.
Well penned...in red
God bless
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
OMGosh! This should win. You guys are getting too fancy with your pictures and presentations. Well done michael. That is indeed scary! Nancy
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OMGosh! This should win. You guys are getting too fancy with your pictures and presentations. Well done michael. That is indeed scary! Nancy
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
Creepy stuff, Mikey. Are you a closet serial killer? j/k. Your stuff is usually highly original. This one didn't quite fit into the category, but still solid.
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Creepy stuff, Mikey. Are you a closet serial killer? j/k. Your stuff is usually highly original. This one didn't quite fit into the category, but still solid.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the pictures. They are scary. Children get scared. What scares them the most is when they think their defenders (parents) will not be there to protect them. The monster under the be is less scary when Mom or Dad can chase them away. Great work.
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I love the pictures. They are scary. Children get scared. What scares them the most is when they think their defenders (parents) will not be there to protect them. The monster under the be is less scary when Mom or Dad can chase them away. Great work.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
Comment from krys123
Mikey;
your pictures are very gory and sensationally effective in representing and complementing your poem Which by the way was very imaginative and truly inventive and ingeniously creative.
The imagery is very descriptive and uniquely and exquisitely expressive throughout your writing. This also gives the impression that mommy is not going to be coming to help her son with the problems underneath his bed. For she has been torn to pieces by the person who's hiding underneath the bed.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this and may the good Lord be with you always Mikey.
Alex
PS: Good luck in the contest.
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Mikey;
your pictures are very gory and sensationally effective in representing and complementing your poem Which by the way was very imaginative and truly inventive and ingeniously creative.
The imagery is very descriptive and uniquely and exquisitely expressive throughout your writing. This also gives the impression that mommy is not going to be coming to help her son with the problems underneath his bed. For she has been torn to pieces by the person who's hiding underneath the bed.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this and may the good Lord be with you always Mikey.
Alex
PS: Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
