There's Something Under My Bed!
Horror Haiku41 total reviews
Comment from 1954speed
Thanks a lot! Woke up @ 3:00 a.m. unable to sleep and find this waiting for me! Well done on the horror concept! Might as well go to work early now. Again, thanks a lot, buddy!!
HA HA HA!
Later, Jim
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Thanks a lot! Woke up @ 3:00 a.m. unable to sleep and find this waiting for me! Well done on the horror concept! Might as well go to work early now. Again, thanks a lot, buddy!!
HA HA HA!
Later, Jim
Comment Written 10-Sep-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
There's Something Under My Bed!i think its the sock monster shoved away where no one can see ha ha mikey excellent piece pal quite striking piece
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There's Something Under My Bed!i think its the sock monster shoved away where no one can see ha ha mikey excellent piece pal quite striking piece
Comment Written 09-Sep-2014
Comment from Sankey
Yuck you awful man you. Grotesque to the limit! Or beyond! Creepy for sure. Still editing my book and cut cut cut. You won'rt recognize it when it comes out again soon for reviewing.
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Yuck you awful man you. Grotesque to the limit! Or beyond! Creepy for sure. Still editing my book and cut cut cut. You won'rt recognize it when it comes out again soon for reviewing.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
Comment from Sasha
My knowledge of haiku is as good as my knowledge of chemistry. But, I really like this one and think it is a dynamite entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best.
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My knowledge of haiku is as good as my knowledge of chemistry. But, I really like this one and think it is a dynamite entry for this contest. I sincerely wish you all the best.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
Comment from Loren (7)
Is Halloween just around the corner or not? This is creepily funny. It engages our fears (especially as youngsters). It does not let up and I'm not putting my feet down on the floor - no way! Loren
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Is Halloween just around the corner or not? This is creepily funny. It engages our fears (especially as youngsters). It does not let up and I'm not putting my feet down on the floor - no way! Loren
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
Comment from starkat
Very scary - horrific - and your words work even without the superb presentation and graphics - there's simply no way out for this child having more than a bad dream - that monster means business and the end won't be pretty.
Delightfully fun and heart warming children't bedtime story - will especially please ages 4-11. The sound of the voice under the bed will make a difference - perhaps a voice like Reagan's in The Exorcist would have them screaming and climbing the walls - a voice like Minnie Mouse might have them calling for daddy and their dog, Rufus, to get that bad monster under the bed.
Enjoyed your horrific haiku ... really horrific.
Well done. Cheers ... ;o)
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Very scary - horrific - and your words work even without the superb presentation and graphics - there's simply no way out for this child having more than a bad dream - that monster means business and the end won't be pretty.
Delightfully fun and heart warming children't bedtime story - will especially please ages 4-11. The sound of the voice under the bed will make a difference - perhaps a voice like Reagan's in The Exorcist would have them screaming and climbing the walls - a voice like Minnie Mouse might have them calling for daddy and their dog, Rufus, to get that bad monster under the bed.
Enjoyed your horrific haiku ... really horrific.
Well done. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
Comment from Caressa_08
This is a good one for this contest, & I thought being scared of just wolf spiders under my bed was hard to deal with. Very good competition here & I think one Dean Kuch might beware of or now since he's running the show with this one, at least, be aware of what he is up against, now & in the future with the beginnings of Halloween ....Now, I think I'll go back to sleeping..on the sofa tonight.
Caressa
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This is a good one for this contest, & I thought being scared of just wolf spiders under my bed was hard to deal with. Very good competition here & I think one Dean Kuch might beware of or now since he's running the show with this one, at least, be aware of what he is up against, now & in the future with the beginnings of Halloween ....Now, I think I'll go back to sleeping..on the sofa tonight.
Caressa
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
Comment from CR Delport
Although the words create that sense of horror, with the assistance of the art work it is truly horrific. YOu have outdone yourself, Mikey :). Good luck.
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Although the words create that sense of horror, with the assistance of the art work it is truly horrific. YOu have outdone yourself, Mikey :). Good luck.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
Comment from LIJ Red
If I don't tell you what you've written, and don't cut and paste, if I don't quibble about the prompt or the science
of haikus, what do I say? Excellent?
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If I don't tell you what you've written, and don't cut and paste, if I don't quibble about the prompt or the science
of haikus, what do I say? Excellent?
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Jesus, where the hell did you get those graphics? The monster under the bed ripping mommy to shreds- chilling...And pretty damn gross.
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Jesus, where the hell did you get those graphics? The monster under the bed ripping mommy to shreds- chilling...And pretty damn gross.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2014
