Talking to someone.
Viewing comments for Prologue "Prologue"I just wanted to talk to someone so here it goes.
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Comment from GracieAnn
keimosobie, Tonto here. I applaud you for venturing out and being transparent in the up and coming non-fiction write that you are preparing. It will resonate because it is real to you and thus for the reader. Just playing this is :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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keimosobie, Tonto here. I applaud you for venturing out and being transparent in the up and coming non-fiction write that you are preparing. It will resonate because it is real to you and thus for the reader. Just playing this is :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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thanks for the review I think
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Just playing about being Tonto, not about the review. :0 GracieAnn
Comment from adewpearl
non-sencicle - nonsensical
I'd like to see a little more detail in your prologue
Since the purpose of a prologue is to interest the reader in turning the page to read more, I need a little more to pique my interest
Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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non-sencicle - nonsensical
I'd like to see a little more detail in your prologue
Since the purpose of a prologue is to interest the reader in turning the page to read more, I need a little more to pique my interest
Brooke
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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thank you I will try to pique the intrest of the reader.
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thank you I will try to pique the intrest of the reader.
