The World's So Full
an octogram128 total reviews
Comment from Domino 2
I've always found it very difficult to write smoothly metered octograms, but you're an expert at them, as proven here, Brooke.
Excellent personification of the spider, plus top metaphors.
Nice one!
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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I've always found it very difficult to write smoothly metered octograms, but you're an expert at them, as proven here, Brooke.
Excellent personification of the spider, plus top metaphors.
Nice one!
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Ray, thank you so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from misscookie
My little man has a look of wonder in his face.
It is a perfect photo for your poem. how great that he is bless to see so many things wonderful thing God has created
thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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My little man has a look of wonder in his face.
It is a perfect photo for your poem. how great that he is bless to see so many things wonderful thing God has created
thank you for sharing
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Miss Cookie, for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome.
Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from humpwhistle
Whoa, Brooke it almost sounds like you're gearing up
for the Halloween season already.
Nothing wrong in teaching the earthier facts of life,
though. Very creative with your 'eve' sounds, I do believe.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Whoa, Brooke it almost sounds like you're gearing up
for the Halloween season already.
Nothing wrong in teaching the earthier facts of life,
though. Very creative with your 'eve' sounds, I do believe.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Lee, thank you so much, my friend :-) Halloween, that time is coming, isn't it, for my annual October poems :-) Brooke
Comment from IndianaIrish
How I enjoyed this wonderful poem, Brooke, the images of the spider web and bee are lovely, and I love the repetition of the word believe.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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How I enjoyed this wonderful poem, Brooke, the images of the spider web and bee are lovely, and I love the repetition of the word believe.
Smiles,
Karyn : )
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
Great genre.
This child is a doll.
Love the look on his face.
We haven't been to that part of Canada yet but do plan to go.
This poem encompasses the joy and fun of childhood.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Great genre.
This child is a doll.
Love the look on his face.
We haven't been to that part of Canada yet but do plan to go.
This poem encompasses the joy and fun of childhood.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Maddie, thank you so much :-) I appreciate your generous six stars. His expressions always delight me :-) Brooke
Comment from ReaThomas
It's a pleasure to be back online and reading your poems. Yours is the first I clicked on. This was a lovely read with an almost whimsical tone. A pleasure as always.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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It's a pleasure to be back online and reading your poems. Yours is the first I clicked on. This was a lovely read with an almost whimsical tone. A pleasure as always.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Rea, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LIJ Red
Of course everything reminds ol' Red of something...Frost and his Design poem...octogram sounds tentacular...excellent
writing, as ever
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Of course everything reminds ol' Red of something...Frost and his Design poem...octogram sounds tentacular...excellent
writing, as ever
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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LIJ, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
Nature presents the eye with light miracles and dark miracles. There really is a sadness in that something as beautiful as a shawl with dew sparkling in its weave could be so deadly. I can feel the " I can't believe".
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Nature presents the eye with light miracles and dark miracles. There really is a sadness in that something as beautiful as a shawl with dew sparkling in its weave could be so deadly. I can feel the " I can't believe".
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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ravenblack, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Trybuck
An octogram to start the day
To bring a smile
Where frowns once were but can not stay
A longer while
For Brooke will make them disappear
And bring to all a ray of cheer
I'm through counting syllables now.. Well done as always, Buck
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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An octogram to start the day
To bring a smile
Where frowns once were but can not stay
A longer while
For Brooke will make them disappear
And bring to all a ray of cheer
I'm through counting syllables now.. Well done as always, Buck
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, Buck, my thoughtful and poetic friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
What a lovely poem. There are really a lot of amazing things in this world which are quite unbelievable. THis is a wonderful poem which has a hint of excitement in it. Well done!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Hello there~!
What a lovely poem. There are really a lot of amazing things in this world which are quite unbelievable. THis is a wonderful poem which has a hint of excitement in it. Well done!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Kausar, thank you for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
