I Found a Missing Sunbeam
quatrains in abcb rhyme146 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
A very nice poem of the sunbeam gone astray. I think it is in Brooke's eye as she looks upon her grandson and he smiles back at her. How awesome! The love you have is like mine for my grandkiddies. I can relate completely. Beautiful poem.
Nice rhyming and complete passion in this one.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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A very nice poem of the sunbeam gone astray. I think it is in Brooke's eye as she looks upon her grandson and he smiles back at her. How awesome! The love you have is like mine for my grandkiddies. I can relate completely. Beautiful poem.
Nice rhyming and complete passion in this one.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Drew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from l.raven
OMG Brooke, look at the happy in those eyes...love to spare...he beyond precious...and NO I can't believe he is starting school soon...I think in the other picture he is giving you raspberries...LOL...I so love your poem...if your going to find the sun in anyones eyes..it will be Sawyers...what a picture...very well written you...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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OMG Brooke, look at the happy in those eyes...love to spare...he beyond precious...and NO I can't believe he is starting school soon...I think in the other picture he is giving you raspberries...LOL...I so love your poem...if your going to find the sun in anyones eyes..it will be Sawyers...what a picture...very well written you...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Linda, he is 28 months old but acts like he's 4 :-) Thanks so very much :-) Brooke
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you are so welcome...what a doll he is...smiling...xxoo
Comment from JudyS
Brooke, This is such a lovely poem. I really enjoyed it. Excellent writing, as usual. Awesome picture of Sawyer as well. Have a great evening, Judy
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Brooke, This is such a lovely poem. I really enjoyed it. Excellent writing, as usual. Awesome picture of Sawyer as well. Have a great evening, Judy
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from ronnie k
I truly enjoyed this poems well placed rhyme,it made a good poem into a excellent work of art, such a easy pleasant read, oh of cause Sawyer smile.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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I truly enjoyed this poems well placed rhyme,it made a good poem into a excellent work of art, such a easy pleasant read, oh of cause Sawyer smile.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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ronnie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
OH my goodness. I can't believe he is going to school already. I bet he is a smart little guy. Nice poem of the sunbeam. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Love the picture. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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OH my goodness. I can't believe he is going to school already. I bet he is a smart little guy. Nice poem of the sunbeam. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Love the picture. Miss Sally
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from daeneam
Another thing that is so hard to deny, besides the light, is the endless happiness you feel for your grandson... I always look forward to read your poems about dear Sawyer. God bless... c", mae
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Another thing that is so hard to deny, besides the light, is the endless happiness you feel for your grandson... I always look forward to read your poems about dear Sawyer. God bless... c", mae
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Mae, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from poetbear
There is that little doll again!
Love that face and shining spirit.
Every word and line match him to the tee.
This is creative and original writing.
A gem!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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There is that little doll again!
Love that face and shining spirit.
Every word and line match him to the tee.
This is creative and original writing.
A gem!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, Maddie. I talked to him on the phone this afternoon. He is such a sweetie :-) Brooke
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Of have no doubt.you are both lucky to have the other in your lives.
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Of have no doubt.you are both lucky to have the other in your lives.
Comment from royowen
Beautifully composed and delivered poem Brooke, there's been a few works with the highlighted " sunbeam" such a mystical subject, when light breaks through clouds, or shines through trees! This is yet another classic poem, ministering to all ages! Uneven syllable count, abcb rhyming, but even rhythmic meter! My 2 grandsons started their classes in New York this week, so snap!
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Beautifully composed and delivered poem Brooke, there's been a few works with the highlighted " sunbeam" such a mystical subject, when light breaks through clouds, or shines through trees! This is yet another classic poem, ministering to all ages! Uneven syllable count, abcb rhyming, but even rhythmic meter! My 2 grandsons started their classes in New York this week, so snap!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Roy, I hope your grandsons love their school experience :-) Thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Goodauthor
I wish they weren't so picky about the length of the reviews, because when the poem is so well written and flows so smoothly that I want to read it over gain, It hard to find something to say.
This was a beautiful poem and so sweet. I enjoyed the read.
Linda
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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I wish they weren't so picky about the length of the reviews, because when the poem is so well written and flows so smoothly that I want to read it over gain, It hard to find something to say.
This was a beautiful poem and so sweet. I enjoyed the read.
Linda
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are welcome.
Comment from LIJ Red
Uh-oh. Now the world and his peers come into play in Sawyer's life. Your poem is as consistent in quality as
usual, and a little astronomy never hurt anybody.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Uh-oh. Now the world and his peers come into play in Sawyer's life. Your poem is as consistent in quality as
usual, and a little astronomy never hurt anybody.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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LIJ, thank you so much :-) Brooke
