I Found a Missing Sunbeam
quatrains in abcb rhyme146 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I love the words to your poem
As always they are a delight to read. your poems always make me smile just like my little mam.
My time does fly, he moving up. I know he will love his class.
Tell him I said Hello!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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I love the words to your poem
As always they are a delight to read. your poems always make me smile just like my little mam.
My time does fly, he moving up. I know he will love his class.
Tell him I said Hello!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Miss Cookie, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome.
Until next time.
Cookie
Comment from HAREEDS
A superb smooth flowing quatrain. The rhythm of the poem is excellent, the abcb format works perfectly here. The children you pick for your poems perfectly match the poems upbeat qualities. Every time you look at a loved one's smile you see a beautiful sunbeam, what could be more warming and poetic than that.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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A superb smooth flowing quatrain. The rhythm of the poem is excellent, the abcb format works perfectly here. The children you pick for your poems perfectly match the poems upbeat qualities. Every time you look at a loved one's smile you see a beautiful sunbeam, what could be more warming and poetic than that.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Hareeds, thank you so much for your thoughtful review and generous six stars :-) Brooke
Comment from Kausar_Javeria
Hello there~!
Awww! THis is definitely one of the sweetest poems I've read. That last paragraph made me smile like a chesire cat.
Well done!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Hello there~!
Awww! THis is definitely one of the sweetest poems I've read. That last paragraph made me smile like a chesire cat.
Well done!
JazakAllah Khair~!
(God Bless~!)
(^_^)-<~~KAUSAR~~>-(^_^)
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Kausar, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from padumachitta
Hi..ah, you miss him, I can feel it:-)
Ah, the beginning of school, those days that change so much.
I hope we get poems about the magic ofthose first days...the sunbeam forever there.padumachitta
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Hi..ah, you miss him, I can feel it:-)
Ah, the beginning of school, those days that change so much.
I hope we get poems about the magic ofthose first days...the sunbeam forever there.padumachitta
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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padumachitta, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Lulube
ohhh Mr. Sawyer is in the system. Now you'll have lots more to write on. The tales of Mr. Sawyer.
cute poem and love the ending
lulube
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ohhh Mr. Sawyer is in the system. Now you'll have lots more to write on. The tales of Mr. Sawyer.
cute poem and love the ending
lulube
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Thanks so much, lulube :-) Brooke
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welcome Brooke
lulube
Comment from Zue65
Again another Sawyer poem, with his sparkling eyes likened to a sunbeam. The message at the last stanza is a truth that appeals to all readers I guess. Lovely, excellent as usual. God bless.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Again another Sawyer poem, with his sparkling eyes likened to a sunbeam. The message at the last stanza is a truth that appeals to all readers I guess. Lovely, excellent as usual. God bless.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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nassus, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from NightWriter
I Found a Missing Sunbeam is a creative and beautiful quatrains poem that warms the heart. Perfect rhythm and rhyme from beginning to end. Poem touches the soul. Well done, well done!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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I Found a Missing Sunbeam is a creative and beautiful quatrains poem that warms the heart. Perfect rhythm and rhyme from beginning to end. Poem touches the soul. Well done, well done!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2014
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Steve,thank you so much, my friend, for your generous and thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Oatmeal
Brooke,
This poem made for an enjoyable read. Flowing very nicely.
Good atmosphere and thrilling emotions. Nothing too serious. Kind of fun!
I did not notice any problems. The picture is awesome.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Brooke,
This poem made for an enjoyable read. Flowing very nicely.
Good atmosphere and thrilling emotions. Nothing too serious. Kind of fun!
I did not notice any problems. The picture is awesome.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Oatmeal, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
I found the missing sunbeam,what a lovely smile. that's a
lovely expressed poem Brooke, nice rhying and flow,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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I found the missing sunbeam,what a lovely smile. that's a
lovely expressed poem Brooke, nice rhying and flow,I enjoyed reading it,God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Erich, thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
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your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from skye
Imaginative and filled with wonderful tidbits. 93 million miles. Hiding a sunbeam isn't possible, too bright. And the twinkling from the eyes.
Loved it. His smile in the picture is perfect.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Imaginative and filled with wonderful tidbits. 93 million miles. Hiding a sunbeam isn't possible, too bright. And the twinkling from the eyes.
Loved it. His smile in the picture is perfect.
Excellent.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much, Skye :-) Brooke
