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I Found a Missing Sunbeam

quatrains in abcb rhyme

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Comment from TAB_that's me
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As for your author notes - they start them so young these days, wow. A friend's granddaughter started too and she is 2 1/2. My twin grandson's just turned 4 and this is their 1st year of preschool. They'll still have 2 years of preschool before kindergarten.

As for the poem, it was perfect and beautiful:)

teresa

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    Teresa, thank you so much - yep, Sawyer is still a couple months short of 2 and a half :-) What age do your grandsons start first grade? Brooke
reply by TAB_that's me on 07-Sep-2014
    They will be 6 when they start. They could go at 5 but they will be a young 5 so I think my daughter will keep the back a year.
Comment from granny goes viral
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Aw, good for Sawyer. Good for mom, and good for grandma too.
Sawyer going to school, should give grandma many lines of good poetry. Thank you Sawyer.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    granny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
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Oh, those shining eyes !!!! How a grandma poet is not going to get inspired. What a wonderful poem my friend. Love each magic image.
Can't believe Sawyer is starting school ! Where did the years go???
Wishing him a wonderful experience in this very important step... Pili

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    Pili, thank you so much - well, not that many years have gone by - he's only 28 months old LOL :-) Brooke
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Loved it. I bet your daughter reads poetry to him every day! He'll probably be heads and tails above the other kids. I read to my Harrison daily and he was reading/writing when he entered Kindergarten.

 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    flamingstar, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
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What a lovely poem. I have been very sick this past week and this sure brightens up my day. Thank you for sharing the Cute Little One.

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    CR, thank you so much. I'm so sorry to hear you've been ill. Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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that picture is adorable, brooke, you did an excellent job writing this sweet poem about the sun that beams when sawyer smiles as you. he seems too young to go to school

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 Comment Written 05-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2014
    sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) Brooke