Comment from Permelia

Excellent

This poem describes exactly how a woman is, how she feels, and how her
emotions take precedence over everything else. Beautifully written.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2005

Comment from amaranthblue

Excellent

What a beautiful weaving of thoughts and emotions with so many images of the evolution of love the different faces and phases that comes within its lasting embrace... I really loved this one my friend...

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2005

Comment from jkhudson

Excellent

This poem has a softness about it. A still quiet reflection. I like it, especially this verse.

Reality now,
is a past
without
explicate,
an echo
of a far away
enrapture,
a certain silence.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2005

Comment from AuroraSky

Excellent

Simply said, emotionally shared...life can have its profound moments in simple words...and your poem is very profound indeed.

It seems you have also been walking the realm of thought, following a train as well.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2005

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

You are a woman and a romantic one at that.
Just lovely my friend. Memories of happier days
that cannot be erased and they should not be,

I am longing
I have forsaken all,
In exchange
for a smile.

I am a woman
solely.

Un abrazo,
Ana

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2005

Comment from Quite Spirited

Excellent

To be a woman
Adopt an installment plan
Smile, because you can.

Excellent presentation
Expressing woman's Id
From her heart and soul.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2005

Comment from Lainee

Excellent

Pili this is magic my friend. The essence of a woman through and through that we females can easily relate to.

Goodluck with this,
Lainee :O)

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2005

Comment from Jewell McChesney

Excellent

How to evict
the words
dancing
in our hearts,
caring whispers
much too clear
to imagine.


Interesting...you romantic you!
All woman too!

Jewell

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2005

Comment from Diny

Excellent

Sometimes you speak right to me sister!

In my longing
I have forsaken all,
in exchange
for a smile.

I have been there and am shamed... I wonder why your work toouches me so
I continue to read in amazment
Write on
Diny

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2005

Comment from Black Wren

Excellent

This is different.
You describe a bittersweet romance where you continue for the past but it is the past and you can't remain there forever.

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2005